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Reviews For: Night Walks

Sabrina 2007-10-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really like the rhythm and flow of this story. I'm not even a Rory/Jess fan, but I like how you've captured Rory's character and the details about dinner with the elder Gilmores are perfect.
Lirazel 2007-08-17 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story over on your journal, and I loved reading it here, too. I adore the way you write angst--it never feels like emo wallowing; you coax the beauty out of the heartbreak, and that's a gift.
Schuyler Lola 2007-08-17 ch 1,	abuseSimply beautiful. This is by far one of the best things I have ever written. Delving into Rory's thoughts like this, and making it so true - it's amazing. This is lovely.
Charolette Lee 2007-08-16 ch 1,	abuseI had told myself, that one of these days, I'm going to read something that's just going to break me completely. Suprising, how quickly, and sharply your story just shattered me, isn't it? Ava, I envy you to no end. I ... this isn't just fanfiction anymore. When you write, it's a mixture of greatness. If anyone had half a mind, they would have compared you to Kafka, and Kerouac, and Austen, and many, many more, because honestly. That's what I'm comparing you to right now. The metaphors you used, and the choices of wording, and emotion, is overwhelming. It keeps truning with a slight movement, then coming back onto a path of bitter emotions. It surves from anger, to lust, then it turns to sadness, to hatred. How do you do that? It's like something you'd expect out of some sort of amazingly done Classic, where you cannot stop reading, and you refuse to put the book down because it's just that ... it's just so spectacular. There have been very few stories, where I have cried. There are only a handful of authros who can write emotion, that's just to unbearable. Of course we have those authors with enough talent, to make your breath to hitch into your throat, but very few can make you cry when reading their stories. And I'm starting to think your one of them. The words are so well chosen, and so well worded, and so well ... put together! That it forms into this sort of fairy-tale, picturesque, sort of moment. When Rory's just splling out all her feelings, and how you could just write it all in third person, mind you, is just stunning. To capture emotins without it being in first person, proves some sort of great talent of sorts ... The emotions, mixed with simple words, mixed with amazing writing, and overall, you'll get this. It's stirred with extreme emotions, dulled out with simple words is, what I think I'm trying to say. But really, it's amazing. -Lee.

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