I loved this series, it was a fun read. I think you have a real knack for writing humor, I've read a bunch of your stories and the humor one-shots in this series were always my favorites. You should really write a lot for humor it always brings a smile to my face (The Art of Embarrassment comes to mind). I'd love to see more!

This one was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. I have enjoyed EVERY chapter and have been woefully BAD at writing reviews. But please know that your writing is wonderful!

Hello! I just wanted to say that you are an AMAZING writter. Also, I wanted to know why you didn't finish this, you only had one more scene left, and it never got done. You have a gift, and I would be lieing if I said I don't think you can utilize that to your benefit. If it isn't to much to ask, I would LOVE for you to finish the what you started, I beleive in you!

Wow, that was really well written! I don't I could've done it :)

Beautiful! I usually don't like fics-poems, but this one is great. I'm off to read the rest :-}

Oh SSJL, I love your writing, especially your determination to prove us with BB love and smut. Please, keep this going.

Uh..that was really good. Hot, my goodness, you have quite the imagination! :)

Oooo...I liked this one too!

THat was my favorite chapter so far. Very good stuff!

I absolutely love their dialogue! It's so spot-on perfect. This whole story is just lovely, and your writing is so good.

I found this story late last night and have been reading it pretty much non-stop since then instead of studying for my finals. This is such a great idea for a story and it really shows what kind of an author you are to be able to write such different things so beautifully. Amazing job and I can't wait until the next, and last, chapter!

i loveedd

that was frigging one of the best poems i've ever read. by god i'm impressed! it was, as it so rightfully points out, hot, but also artful and elegant! amazing work.

I really, really love this chapter.

I love Brennan's growing desperation, her confusion, her fear, her caving and calling Jared, Jared being Boothy enough to threaten her with the "Don't make me regret this," her arriving in a downpour, her standing out there until she's soaking wet, her terror at making a decision... ALL of that just rings SO true.

And you did excellent work with Booth's similar reticence and fears that things aren't going to work out, that he'll be rejected a second time, but his willingness to take the risk, to admit that it's always been her. Really excellent.

I love this line: 'Please God please' and 'Screw you, you bastard.'

*snicker*