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JAXTIG 8/16/07 . chapter 2
Once again you are creating something wonderful. The first page (chapter? story? whatever...) I didn't realize until the end I had tears in my eyes! You write in such a way that just pulls you in. I can't wait for more! soon PLEASE!
ForAReason 8/16/07 . chapter 1
They say there is such a fine line between genius and insanity, so where you say you're crazy, I say you're a friggin genius. I wish I could send you Booth to smother you in kisses to show my appreciation but alas, I'm afraid he probably has a restraining order on all psychotic fangirls.

This is a really awesome setup. It's like Christmas, being surprised every time with a totally unexpected present. With Talk to Me, you build things up over chapters and I can prepare myself for the hotness, but this hotness will be totally out of the blue every time. Amazing idea. I'm looking forward to quite a few of those locations and I'll know you'll make them great. Though your fiancee must be really intrigued with scraps of paper with possible sex locales on it. LOL. Again, genius or insanity?

Onto this chapter: I admire your 2nd person. I could never write like that so it's something new and different for me. I have to say I was a little nervous at first cause 2nd is hard to pull off but by the end I was so lost in it I didn't even notice, so hat's off to you.

She’s looking back at you now. “You don’t have to worry about me so much, you know.” Others may have found her eyes unreadable, but you see the remains of a thousand different disappointments there. Somehow, despite this, she shines—she dazzles you. You will not add to those disappointments.

Ah, kill me now. That was perfect. So much of their characters in that. I loved it.

You slid back away from the edge of the roof, pulling her with you, away from any prying eyes. Your fingers were trembling as they worked at the buttons on her shirt, but she was urging you on with her lips and her eyes. When you slid it off, you were momentarily stunned; the moonlight reflected off of her skin with an almost supernatural glow, and although you don’t believe in such things you wondered briefly if she wasn’t some type of ancient moon goddess, sent here to tempt you with otherworldly pleasures.

Incredible imagery. I could see how Booth was seeing her. Amazing.

You weren’t entirely sure how you would continue to convince her of what she meant to you, and what she meant to the world. Later, as you look backwards in the mirror at the marks where the rooftop scraped your back and your ass, you’ll think that this is the bare minimum of suffering you will go through to make her understand how important she is. However inadequate it may have seemed, your night on the rooftop was a moment of birth, of creation. And you will never again look at the night sky without equating it with majesty that was giving yourself to the woman you loved.

That was gorgeous, really. I can't say much more than that cause I'm speechless. I am so excited for the next hat pick. Keep up the excellent work (on everything, LOL.)
fanofbones 8/16/07 . chapter 1
OK this is gonna be an excellent ride indeed girl...

This was magical and beautiful and up until this moment didn't realize how good 2nd person Booth could be (read)...I had a doubt or two when you were describing...I thought it would take something away (too different)...wow...that explains just why I'm not a writer :) and why I always flunked literature lol...

Incredible I tell ya and eagerly anticipating more...you are truly a master...

fab
Michele 8/16/07 . chapter 1
You are brilliant. I don't know how you come up with this stuff. I read Talk To Me religously, and I look forward to your next update. Oh, who am I kidding? I check every hour for an update. I have no life. But that's okay, because I'm living vicariously through your stories.
Kasper ze Chemist 8/16/07 . chapter 1
Jeez someone is on a roll! Not that I am complaining...

That is an interesting way of coming up with scenes, drawing from a hat. Should make for interesting reading.

I thought this was great, how she seemed goddess-ly (I can't think of another word) and how Booth cares so much.

I eagerly await to see what the hats bring next.
awilystar 8/16/07 . chapter 1
You know I always love what you write, and this was no different! What a great idea to spice up the generic smutfic :) As for your comfort zone, I relish the day you step outside of it and give us something a-mazing.
jerseybones 8/16/07 . chapter 1
OMG, I love your writing and this is exactly why I had added you awhile ago to my favorite authors list.

This is such a great idea, to give yourself a personal challenge, and I love every single combination you came up with. I can't wait to read the next "hat" challenge.
seudo 8/16/07 . chapter 1
WOW.
willgirl 8/16/07 . chapter 1
Wow. I don't actually know what to say other than 'you rock my world.' Seriously. What a great idea first of all, very original and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

And secondly, this chapter was beautiful!
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