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Wander52
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseThat was a neat story with a different twist...I actually found myself liking LH a little bit. Great job.
Gema227
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseI am happy to let you know that this story has been nominated for the 2007 Forensics Award for "Best Het Romance". Please see my bio for more information. Good luck and congrats!
Maisy13
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abuseAw man, crying through the entire story. Beautiful. 2 More Days!:):)
xxBuffyfreakxx
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abusevery nice.
StarlaMarie
2007-09-11
ch 1,
abuseI think I wasn't turned off by Lady Heather in this story because while she had an important part, you still kept Sara and Grissom in the limelight. Heather was kind enough and VERY well written.
Jaby
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abuseA nice view on a very different side of Lady Heather. I liked it.
And "a sociobiological instinct" - that is so Grissom. *g*
TyriaT
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseThis was really different and really good. I'm not a huge fan of Heather, but that's because she has the potential to take Gil away from Sara. Then again, it's not like she knows about Sara. And just because nothing has been shown on screen, doesn't mean they haven't kept up with their friendship.

You're making me rethink the characters. Thanks. :)
GSRfanatic25
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abusefantastic story
it was great how you made it from heather's pov, unexpected, but it worked so well
and you wrote her character perfectly
well done
angsty-otaku
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseWhat an amazingly well written story. You wrote Heather, not as an immediate enemy but as a friend. Great :-)
csi020gsr
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseThat's just what I needed on my mind to go to bed, thanks:)
It's been another long summer w/o Billy!!:(
He didn't even do a new photo shoot for TV Guide. Old pic!!
And I'm a little tense about Jorja leaving:(
But I really enjoyed the message in this one.
Thanks again for the boost:))
Eszie
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseIt's really, really a fantastic story!
This could be the next episode, that good is your story!
amisha.pineapple
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseI loved that. I mean, I love just about everything you write but this was brilliant. I thought everyone's reactions to Heather being in Grissom's office were wonderful and I loved the ending with the baby. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.
adara13
2007-08-21
ch 1,
abuseThis was a really interesting take on the post Living Doll fics. I liked that you wrote it from Lady Heather's point of view, or actually, I guess it was more like you wrote it "Heather Kessler's" view--the woman, not the dominatrix. It was a really interesting take and I enjoyed it a lot.
Immokk
2007-08-21
ch 1,
abuseVery good, great to have you bakc- Mind updating a WIP, just while I'm reviewing and all...

Heather was wonderfully in character, her conversation with Grissom was both sad and amusing because of how alike they are yet how different they can be.

Really good.

Great last line too.
Andsowego
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseGreat story, and welcome back! This tale is as lovely and believable as your others. Fave line... "conventionality not being interesting to man who spoke with such passion about cockroaches". So describes Grissom! Thanks, and I hope to read more new stories from you in the near future.
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