Well, at least he admits he was wrong to kiss Mai...*slaps Zuko upside the head* Bad Zuko!

I actually like your protrayle of zuko! I've actual always pictured his mind working like this while his outer body acts all depressed. I respect your shipping opinoun. I liked it even though i am an extremely strong maiko/kataang shipper!

xP I never thought Mai was very pretty. . But she's kinda nice, I guess, to Zuko.

Anyways, this is good, even if Zuko's a bit OOC. /doesn't like Maiko moments in Avatar

OMG!:glomps Sassy: I love you! You just made my day. We all know Maiko won't last, (If it ever starts) I still think the kiss was a dream. I don't hate Mai. But I could never see her with Zuko. She's just not his type.

Oh, wow! This is totally awesome!! But then again, I love ALL your stories! But this is just incredible! I wish I was able to write like that. XD

ZUTARA LIVES ON FOREVER! Great job!

My theory over their kiss in the ComicCon trailer was because of an arranged marriage (because if he's in line for Fire Lord again, he needs an heir...) but then he runs away, joins the gAang, and it's fluffy Zutara goodness!

Okay, my pointless ramblings aside, this was good. Can't wait for more!

The 1st person who reviewed said that epi 9 ia nightmares and daydreams, right? Well i was lookin up stuff and someone put a link to a deviant art. It had the kiss and it had someone...maybe, creator? Put "I wish I didn't have to draw this. It was just a dream anyways" I REALLY hope that was true! ZUTARA 4EVR!

Well doy that much is obvious that he shouldn't have kissed Mai! Now Zuko, just keep thinking those thoughts and we'll all be happy. Great story!

i love the last line. i should have never kissed mai. now thatz what i like. =D

I swear, i've never been this crazy about ship ever! I'll admit, that Maiko kiss made me so friggin mad I wanted to punch a wall, but thankfully I've calmed down. I don't care if Zuko was OOC. I still like it as a protest to anyone who harbors Maiko feelings. Zutara forever!

It was a little repetetive, but still alright.

I am an EXTREME Makio shipper, so if I was a zutarian I would have liked it, LOVED it actually. Anything to be a againts Makio, but obviously that's not the case. Here's what I think, since your saying how you turned the whole thing into a zutara situation, here is what I think-

The writting itself was pretty good (If I was zutarian). The story was a bit off, (but, of course, it was very short). You made Zuko a little to hung-up on looks, sorry, but I hate it when he is protrayed like that. I think Zuko is far from shallow, of course, this is fan-fiction, so I will let that slide. Most characters are ooc in fan-fiction. Exept everything here, I doubt is actually whats going through zuko's mind, but it made a good fan-fiction.


Here is facts about Makio-

1. The trailer only shows the first 7 episodes.

2. Zuko and Mai are going to share a kiss in the first episode, (it's confirmed, not speculated), and it's not the same kiss that is shown in the trailer.

3. Mai is one of Mike's favourite characters.

4. They are supposed to be "regniting" a old flame. Which means either they were very good friends, or might have actually been lovers. So they will def have some kind of relationship.

5. Mike and Brian said that there will be a romatic relationship.

6. Zuko and Mai look like there on a date on that comic thing. Now, I don't know if that will happen in the show, but it's def hinting that there will be a relationship.

7. Voice actress of Azula says that she loves how Mai has got Zuko so whipped.

There are WAY more stuff, but I won't waste my time saying why i like Makio and such, because what I listed is factual, why I like it, that would be more opininated.

So I really doubt zutara will happen, at least in that way.

XD aw poor little Zuko and his inner conflicts! but it made me happy. yay zutara!

That was amazing! I don't know how you did that but thank you!

mehee...

yay! but i HEAR (not fact!) that eppisode 9 in season 3 is nightmares and daydreams. explination? i think MAYBE!