 Love Robin Miller 2008-10-02 . chapter 1 Me again! Still unregistered, but I'm seriously considering...
"Another Possibility" actually brought tears to my eyes! Aside from the grammer errors(my offer to proof still stands) my heart broke along with Kim's.
This part was melodramatic and depressing, however I can so totally see events similiar to "Pathetic Bonnie Rockwaller" occuring next with Bonnie moving in. Their waking up on the couch the morning-after-ice-cream could lead into the same admission of Bonnie's feelings as from LOL after she "doth proteth too much". I can see several times during the short period Kim will need to entertain this revelation where she falls asleep on the couch alone only to wake up with Bonnie cuddling her after having handled Alexa's nightly feedings because Kim was too exhausted to wake, and her room being closer to the baby's than the living room anyway.
Bonnie's snobish former attitude would strike a familiar Shego-like chord in Kim, if not Shego's martial skills. I think from there it could lead to Bonnie going on missions alongside Kim. After all in NoDrog's "A Small Possibilities" GJ had their eyes on "The Rock" as a potential field agent. She *did* have some promising moments in the Canon stories "Bonded" and "Return to Wannaweep", which can mean that her aerobatic cheerleading skills could be bolstered by some Kim/GJ training courses...
This would leave Ron babysitting Alex(Alexa for short?) alongside Hana, perhaps even training *them* in Mystical Monkey(Monk Fu?), setting up for their teenage adventures. Hana would be a couple years older which could mean that Alexa is the side-kick unless her Kim/Shego personality is more dominate. Because of Hana there could be room for a Ron/Yori hook up as well.
I don't know who else you chat/collaborate with, but let me say that I am hooked on your tale-spinning and would love to have a part in it with you. (mouthing "Email me") |
 Tommy 2008-01-11 . chapter 1 I liked this story and I can't wait to read more from this universe. I love the ending the fics with songs idea. I am going to go look up both songs you put in this series next time I am on Limewire. Keep up the great work. |
 Alexander - Godslayer 2007-10-29 . chapter 1Now this is really some heart-breaking work.
I really like this type of stories in which most of what it's done is just making the life of one character, this time Kim, starting by explaining her current situation, then briefly telling how she got there, how are the people around her living, and what is she expecting for the future.
Overall, I liked how you explained the outgoing of the events of "Seeing Double" around here. Another thing I liked it's the groups of superheroes you explained around. I'm particulary curious about Catgirl. And since Ren is with Ron, who is Jen hanging up with now?
Well, now I'm even more intrigued than before about this MI-B universe and can't wait for the arriving of Kim's future "partner" ^^U. Anyway, great job, as always, so thanks for writting it.
See ya!! |
 Desslock3 2007-08-18 . chapter 1Nice! I was hoping that you would do a follow up to "Another Possibility" and it was worth the wait. Really looking forward to future chapters and seeing Kim's struggles with being a single mom, finding happiness, and how Alexandra deals with the way the world reacts to her. But what really makes this arc intresting is how it's similar yet differant than your "Maternal Instinct" arc. It should be fun watching these two fics fleash out and being able to comparea and contrast them to each other. |
 Etherelemental 2007-08-17 . chapter 1That was good. I really enjoyed the bits where Kim was reflecting about how she'd gotten over Shego's death and how things had gone on. It wasn't really an action packed fic like you usually do, but rather a quiet time where Kim relaxed and reflected on things. Though, I'm wondering if you're going to pair Jen up with someone in this universe, mostly because I can't remember if you mentioned of that plan or not. Though, it did flow quite nicely. And I was also amused at Kim's suit with the guy who asked her what circus Alexandra came from. ^_^ By the way, I was wondering if you were going to give Alexandra a nickname. One of the shorthand names that often go with a person's given name. Just wondering. ^_^ Anyway, thanks for posting this. I hope to see more works from you soon! |
 immortal7 2007-08-17 . chapter 1i like that she didn't continue with the clone it would have been a a cheap imitation adn would have hurt her more in the long run than anythinng. any way i liked it later |
 Invader Johnny 2007-08-17 . chapter 1Well I see ya put slight refernces to the oroginal "MI" Universe, mostly the clone thing and Jen Credible.
I see that Kim will not have an easy life for now but I´m sure that in the future she won´t be alone most likely since YOU confirm that.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 Slyrr 2007-08-16 . chapter 1Poor Kim - that sounds like it would be rough, to see your clone pick up where you left off, and leaving you to go down a totally different road. Talk about poignant 'might-have-beens'...
But Kim would be a bang-up mom, no doubt about it. I kinda wanted to hear a little more about Ron's doings, but if there's a sequel coming up... : ) |
 my gaurdian HaruHara 2007-08-16 . chapter 1Ihat was a bitter sweat story and I enjoyed it very much
I can't wwait what you do with the nect part of this story. |