Great story, PLEASE continue! :D
invader.invisible

Love the story! Really original and you got the characters down pat.
Cant wait to read more! please update soon!

it is been a while... I am happy that u didn't stop this story ^^ I love it

Will Raimundo try something again?

Dear Bellaluna ~
It took you long enough.
I've been waiting FOREVER.
I love this story.
JacKim rocks.
You write very well.
Good bye.
Sincirely,
Oh My Good Gravy

I do hope Kimiko and JAck will mature and stop the fighting. Also, I hope that AShley really isn't Jack's girlfriend. Kimiko does seem to start 'warming' up to him.

another great chapter, i look forward to your next update

Oh! The monster of the green eyes had attacked *shuckle*

wow, after reading all these chapters i just wnt to read more! just when Jack lets on his feelings to Kimiko. he seems to faint in the water! looknig forward to the next chapter!

HI I THJE BEST FAN THAT YOUR HISTORY PLZZ CONTINUE I READ AND YOUR JOB IS GREAT PLZZ CONTINUE :) BYEE :)

This is getting so interesting, i want to know what happens next. Pls continue as fast as you can! I love it!

Oh, don't leave me hanging here. I can't wait till the next chapter or two :). I like it. The Pairing is cute. I wonder if it will turn to a love triangle between Raix Kimikox Jack. A brief one maybe. Maybe not.

Deju Vu! I do believe a while back I read a fanfic like this one before with the same plot as this one. This could be the same one with a rewrite of the chapters or a coincidence, diffrent story and great minds just think a like. Either way I enjoy this fanfic. :)

this is very good so far.
update.

oh wow! Keep going!!