Ooh, I think it'd be interesting if you continued this story... Though I know you probably won't since it's a oneshot, and it annoys me when people ask me to write sequels for oneshots. xD Anyway, I liked it! This was actually the first Yakari story I've read so far, but I liked it even though I'm such a Takari fan... I like how Yamato brings out the... erm, less innocent side of Hikari. XD Since Takeru seems to bring out her innocence? Ah, maybe I have no idea what I'm talking about. xD

aww, it was so cute. ^-^