I'm loving this well thought out side story to Sculping for dummies, great job! I feel so bad for lil' deidei though..having to fend for himself...

nu the end of the story T.T dam thts the worst part of reading it XD but AWSOME JOB <3

omg i read the first chapter and was TOTALLY HOOKED! omg i love your story making skills job AWSOMELY done cant wait to read on <3

I like it.
This is my second time reading Sculpting for Dummies. (I rarely reread stories so that means a lot) but haven't really read this part past chapter two.

I think the characterization for some are good and pretty close.
I think you made Kakuzu too patient though. But that was also WAY before his appearance in teh anime, wasn't it?

And i agree with you on Kisame.
He's probably may fave anyway. (HAIL KISAITA!) Fangirl moment.
... I'd do him.

ANYWAY, nice work.

Hope more comes outta ya.

Lovez.

~Noah

I agree with you entirely about Itachi. XD

lol, I can imagine him literally being "dragged" into the Akatsuki headquarters by Sasori XD and him saying "** let me go, un!" DX "I DON'T WANT TO JOIN!"

Aw, isn't that sweet, Deidara insults Tobi in every way possible, but we all know it's just his way to say "I wuv you" ~_'
I really like the way you portraid Deidara, frankly, I've had it with the "stupid dumb talentless blonde Deideichan" (except for Shurikenintheface's, cause at least he's got talent and taste).
Loved this happy ending (:

I have mixed emotions about this story, I sort of want to cry and smile at the same time :S either way you're a really good writer and it kept me reading and I also think you got everyone's character perfect so great job

Wonderful story, i loved it! The last chapter was so cute that I almost started crying. You are an amazing writer demonrubberducky ^^

hugs
~Qxxl

OMFG when I stumbled across this I was so happy! It seems so much like Deidara, because if you think about it, it makes sense! I felt sorry for him though...Your writing style kept the story interesting and kept me hooked. Good job! ^^

rikaCHA!n

Yes, this is sad and horrible, but in the end, it is sorta happy. Cupcakes for you.

I really liked this. The beginning was sad, but it got a lot better. :)

I liked this story lot. Um it was well written and interesting. I thought that pretty much all the characters were acturate um oh and I loved the very sweet end. Made me feel all warm fuzzy =)
Keep up the good work
~Kan-kun

Aw
That was so sweet, I love Deidara.
Thanks for the story.

AW! Deidei is so sweet!