Pure perfection! thank U for this!

oh i loved this. you really captured how trapped rory feels in her relationship with logan and how jess makes her feel like it's okay to be herself. so yay :)

You have to write more!! Does she go to meet him?

Ugh - I hate cliffhangers! :) LoL

Melissa

Goddamn you're wonderful. This was beautiful, wonderful. I love it.

You're incredible. ;]

Wonderful little story.
The chance meeting is perfect, and your writing is always phenomenal.

This is so well-written. It's melancholic, yet the end is hopeful. I love how you use metaphors in creative ways, like her ring hurting her is a symbol for Logan doing it...
Jess is Jess, nothing more, nothing less, and that is perfect.
This is wonderful. I hope you'll write something more soon.

wow this was just so...fantastic! i love it! the way you compare the ring to things like her relationship with Logan was perfect. I couldn't picture a better way for them to react when they meet. There was no big "Oh my god Jess...!" it was just blunt and to the point. Thanks you for a great read. =D

I love how subtle this story is. Like nothing much really happens but you can see such a sea change in Rory's internal state just from little details.

Wow this was really, really good,the description of whats going around in the train and how Rory sees things , the bittersweet in her tone when she talks to Jess and the fact that she went to change clothes, i don't know maybe because she wanted to feel like herself not only on the inside.

i think i'm reading to much into this, but thanks for posting this it was a great way to ease my mind after some stressfull days.

I really liked this, very clever and a horrible glimpse of what could have been.
One of my favourite things is that you had Rory reading The Patron Saint of Liars, extremely good choice. Scary allusions to the future.

I could cry right now, it's just so beautiful...everything was perfect..just perfect...and i love it so much.

oh thank the gods of fanfic. i thought i was gonna have to wait about another four chapters to get to the breaking up of rory and logan. you see as much as i love your writing, rory and logan together is always somethign i don't stomach very well. this way i ahve nothign but a big fat old grin when i press the story alert button.

well writen

Wow. That was really well written. I love how the ring (her tie to Logan) was rubbing her raw and causing her pain and in contrast how easy and natural her relationship with Jess is, they know eachother and just fit.