Aw, this is an adorable little story you have here. I absolutely adored it. Your spelling and grammar are almost impeccable, but there are a few minor mistakes here and there. But other than that, great job!

so sweet 10489475634785634756/10 it was very good

Nicely written, with the perfect amount of fluff :D Good job!

This is so cute. I really like it. I like most of your stories actually.

Aw, it's so sweet.

I love how Kiba could only use the word "heaven" to describe her scent. It's so, so cute!

I like this one. Its . . . different. Its funny cause you know I kinda miss the days like that, a simpler time.

really good

veru cute! nice story!

thats really cute

Hey, I loved this story! Don't usually go for first person narratives, but this was really quite well done. Great job!

so sweet i loved it you should make a sequel to this !

It's like looking back at someone's childhood - meeting a stranger and then becoming friends, and then growing apart. You've captured one of the best moments in a friendship.

Very cute and fluffy. :3

It was a very sweet story and your a awesome writer. I loved how kiba was so straight forward, and would just tell it straight.

I think Hinata and Kiba complete eachother. Outgoing and shy.

Wonderful story and keep writing. PLEASE! :)

That was so Cute! I didn't like the end where they drifted apart though... :(

Awz... KibaHina fluff! xD

Cute. Loved it, even the second time through.

Liked the ending a lot. Contrast to the way the rest of the story went and all that.

Overall, it was awesome. :D