 princetongirl 2007-09-17 . chapter 1loved it update soon |
 SavedByGrace14 2007-09-01 . chapter 1Aww cute! |
 Death Fox of Chocolate 2007-08-19 . chapter 1i loved it! i've always wondered what would happen if casey and derek liked each other...and now i know! it was great! please keep writing(unless this is a one shot then please write more) and i will keep reading!! thanx!! byebye fox-chan ps. can you please read my story 'anime idol season 1'? i need some more reviews on it before i can continue it and i really want to continue it! thanx again!! byebye |
 MsRoseWeasley 2007-08-18 . chapter 1excellent! that's the only word I can think of to descripe.
it is excellent! write more! |
 muslim2594 2007-08-18 . chapter 1dat was good...a bit more detail in it en it wud hav been awsum! |
 victoria alexandra 2007-08-17 . chapter 1CUTE!CUTE!CUTE! Loved it! |
 mysterygal02 2007-08-17 . chapter 1Great story! |
 bsloths 2007-08-17 . chapter 1ooh, I'll take a brownie!
This is just how I like my Dasey oneshots, to the point and filled with fluffy goodness. Good job for your first fic. I'm glad you made Paul the one who got the ball rolling- he is so much more perceptive than he lets on.
Oh, you might want to do a quick edit before you post- sometimes the sentences were a bit choppy and the punctuation was off, but otherwise nice story! |
 ICanReadYouLikeABook 2007-08-17 . chapter 1It was pretty good, but a bit too choppy. Plus, you should NEVER do the 'wait, am I falling in love with him? No way! Ok, I am,' thing. It's lame, and way less creative than doing something else. Besides, it's over-used. Everyone does that thing. Yet they never realize how bad it makes the story. |
 True Love Lives Forever 2007-08-17 . chapter 1Aww. That was very sweet. I loved the story and how you incorporated Paul into it. Great job! |
 MaskedSuperhero 2007-08-17 . chapter 1aw thats so cute and sweet |
 mayapapaya500 2007-08-16 . chapter 1That was AWESOME! I loved it! Good... no... Great job! I know that doesn't mean much coming from me, but trust me it was awesome! |
 Zuzzeroo 2007-08-16 . chapter 1aw. this was really sweet (adds to favourites) u could have made it into a chapter story if u wanted to. Please review Stranger. thanks
Luv
Zuz |
 Indifference Romance 2007-08-16 . chapter 1BROWNIES! Oh joy! lol this story ROCKS! It was unlike any sotry i have ever read. Loved how Derek took ther papers from her lol. I am so adding to favs...ps these brownies rock!
~Indiffrence Romance♥ |
 Tegannn 2007-08-16 . chapter 1This is a really cute story. =D
I like the way she realises that she is in love with Derek. Great Job. |