WHA?! Why not continue it?! I'm starting to like it...it's pretty good really...please continue it

I'm sorry, but I still don't see how 'imitation life' makes this a reasonable plot. To make something seem alive, she'd need a soul for it. Cornello made that large bird using the souls of smaller birds, but it is nothing comparable to what you're proposing. This plot is skating on exceedingly thin ice, as the skill specified is not one that is possible given the setting you have chosen.
The only way her 'imitation life' is possible is if it's a hoax or she has one of the sins fake philosophers stones that allows for a dead animal to be temporarily animated, and there is no way she could have created a living, breathing chick out of fire made from sand. This is less like alchemy and more like magic.

Sophie

Aw, I love your story. Ria is so original. I really hope you continue this story!

Please continue it is very good.

He-heh? WHAT? No, continue! You'll get more reviews later on, definitely! ^^ Can't wait to see what happens next - things will reach a climax... ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^

Very nicely done! This story is extremely well-written, and I you've created a very unique OC.

Hehe, I feel sorry for Al too, lol.

So, with that said, please update soon! Looking forward for more!
O.B.

Your prologue is really good too! (Sorry I skipped chapter 1 before, I was in a rush) I feel like most of the people are rather in-character, and I can't wait to see what happens. I'm pretty sure that this new power uses some other more 'sinful' deadly power... olalala *shiny lights* ^^

U did good job, keap it going:)

...I really love your writing style! It's very descriptive and not-so-boring at the same time. But just get one thing straight: Equivelent Exchange, the principle mentioned at the begnning of EVERY EPISODE. You can't just create life from nothing... I'd love to see where you go with this, though! *favs* *alerts*