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| Azaria Stromsis 2008-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseYour poem captures it perfectly! That's all that really need to be said! I agree with you so much on the fact that I have a horrible feeling that Bella will go looking for Jacob. I think I will cry if that happens... ~Azaria. |
| MyBrandofHeroin24 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseOmg, this is brillent! So beautiful! I love it! Keep on writing! |
| caz15th 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! WOW! This is...I'm speechless! This fits seamlessly into the original poem, its perfect answer/response. You caught Bella so well! That was amazing! And don't be too hard on poor Bella. I think she's made her choice now, she's let Jake go. At the end of Eclipse she knew that she'd made mistakes and that it was time to choose, so she did. But anyway, awesome work! I love it! |
| Dancer of the Wind 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseAs a firm hater of Jacob, I am very glad to see yet another person who was sickened by the kissing scene with Bella. I'm not looking forward to Breaking Dawn, because judging by the excerpt I read from it, the werewolves are nowhere near done with her... TT.TT I really wish that Stephenie Meyer hadn't written beyond Twilight. Twilight was wonderful, but then she brought in all the crap with Jacob in New Moon, and it just got horrible. I think the best decision for her would have been too just kill off Jacob at the end of Eclipse, but oh no, he had to survive in order to torment Bella more. Ugh. Stupid werewolf. |
| Hermione Alice Cullen-Grang... 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was really awesome. Seriously. Usually I can't stand rhyme--it often sounds forced--but you pulled it off perfectly. This is going on my favorites list! |
| Silverwing14 2008-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! I love the original by Frost, but yours send chills through MY veins! You are an awesome poet, and keep up the awesome work!! |
| mrskatiecullen 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abusewow. that was awesome. |
| Mirrorbay2000 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was breathtakingly, beautiful, and amazing, and just w.o.w. I was tearing up at the end, it was so good! You're such a good poet. |
| starlily 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abusewow...just wow. Fire and Ice is one of my absolute favorite poems, and one of the only ones I know by heart. I am a complete Twilight obsessor, and this poem is one of the most amazing things I have ever read. Its very unique, especially so when you can take a poem that is very well known and turn it around into something that is your own. Truly remarkable. Love it! |
| Slowlytheblooddrips 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice- I like the idea of fire and ice being the same thing in ways. It almost reminded me of when a friend of mine told me about how she got a wart removed from her leg...she said that the stuff they zapped her with was so hot that it was cold...disgusting, but hey... It's nice to be reading your stuff again! I haven't been on this site in a long time, I missed it. |
| iluvchocs 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job on this poem - I really loved the progression. One minor point: 'parish' should be 'perish'. |
| janya.wrote.nightrose 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseWOW. Madly awesome. |
| addicted2twilight2 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThat is very impressive! |
| Global Conquest-er 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseGod! That was amazing!! Thanks :) |
| RedEmber018 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseit is absolutely wonderful...it has a depth of true feelings, and very realistic...LOVE IT THOUGH |