poor Sirrus! When he was trying injecting the pain killer, my mind was screaming "NO! no, Sirrus, no, don't do it!!"
it was so real..

Sirrus insanity...
Delightful! ;)

I like the idea that the painkillers come from the pirates... did you invent it, or is it supposed to be so?

Wow. Just amazing. This was so sad and wonderfully depressing, and ironic. He can't die by that. The imagery...the thought to his brother. I love this story! ^_^

This was wonderfully written.

Ah, nothing like a good Sirrus on Spire fanfic to brighten my day! Really, I wish there were a lot more, 'cause Sirrus on Spire is one of my favorite things and I've only found like, three fics about it, including this one. Anyway, I really liked this...well-done, considering you've never had the joys of Rev and exploring Spire/ranting about Spire/tapping stuff on Spire for yourself :) *applauds* *and favorites*