Nice front page! *smirk* I love this story! Last comment of Yumi was best!

It really is a shame that the image dont satisfy the expectations of the girls!

Maybe they should go to a delivery to provide the latest and to check that the picture will be this time described correctly:)

Thank you for that and I can tell that I giggle when writing this message!

Mutta pirkuleen hyvä tarina tämä oli kiitos vielä suomeksikin(Finnish)

omg lol that waz sweet and funny next one needs to be longer kk

Hahahahaha! OMG! That was so funny... okay... sorry. Nice little fic here though. Yeah XD

LOL.

that could've been alot longer, but it was good. and funny. I mean, sure it was short, but you had good grammer and all. I can't complain. Keep writing!

Haha. That was funny. I liked it.