Ya know, I don't think this chapter really needed an extra scene. Even though my scroll bar seems to suggest it's not that long, I want you to know I think it's lying. It's plenty long.

I guess the most important thing in here is the thing pretty much all your loyal readers that have been waiting for since...what, chapter five? Chapter six, maybe? I dunno, I'm too lazy and tired at this point to find out, but something like that. The email.

Stan really needs to check that more often if he's going to get anything done at college. It's essential, that email-checking.

Gah, I'm digressing...fuck getting used to 11 AM bedtimes.

Anyway, the content of the email.

I suppose the best way to describe it is...it seems kinda anachronistic? Or whatever the best term to describe your saying something we as readers already know is. But maybe now Stan will actually tell Kyle he read this and they can kinda head a little closer to that happy slashy ending?

As for the rest of the chapter, there's not much I feel like commenting about this time of night. Except to snigger about Stan talking about erecting taboos. Heh.

Anyway, good job! Looking forward to the next one, as always.

YES, an update!! =D I've been waiting so long for this!

And I love it! Stan finally understood what he's feeling and realized what he has to do. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

I'm so happy that you updated! This story is INCREDIBLE & this chapter written BEAUTIFULLY! AWESOME JOB!

Wow I have been waiting to read that email forever! Finally getting to see it was a great surprise ^_^
Great chapter, as always, go you!!

please hurry! I need this story like I need air!

You do a wonderful job giving Stan a voice. it's very him and the way he process the world around him is lovely and genuine. I love Kyle here too, he's just perfect. I'm enjoying this very much and I can't wait for the next part.

Yep, totally hooked to this story.
Can't wait for an update!

I love the fic. Update soon!

Holy bloody hell, where do I start?

Well, I suppose with the fact that we're at the part of the story where things begin to hang over a precipice of cliche. Because there's really no easy way to handle the "OMFGAMIGAYFORHIM?" part of a slashfic, especially from first person pov. Which is why I tend to skip over that part or minimise it as much as possible, but...

It's definitely a little awkward. There's not really any way for it not to be though, so I'm not going to criticise you too much for that. Then again, the Stan and Kyle interaction throughout this whole story has been kinda awkward, so this is pretty much par for the course. I think...

Kyle's got a lot of morbid thought processes in this story. I personally don't care what my epitaph is, as long as it's not something like "douchebag asshat."

You already know my thoughts on the poem.

And, of course, the way you end the chapter...is food for any fangirl/boy/boi. He likes Kyle.

Does this satisfy you?

OMG, I just sat here for two hours straight and read this all the way through.
I feel so tired for some reason. lol
This is a wonderful story and I hope the updates come quickly. You have such a talent for writing and finding this story just made my day :D
Hope the next chapter comes out quickly!
Im already a HUGE fan.

Such quick updates! Go you XD

i dont know whats better. the ultimate speed that this update came at or the fact that i actually managed to review your stuff.

i think its cool that stan is finally starting to realize shizz. It's like the perfect time in the story for radical updates. Like aoh yeah. okay but i think every review i write in arow is geting worse and worse... and i'm realy thirsty.

YES THERE IS A LUMP OF THINGS. I'm interested.
Peace, homes.

Alright so here is my second review in less than 30 seconds. It is crazy I can't believe it was a year ago you started posting this. if i recall correctly you were on msn with me and said "i havea story in my notebook that i am writing but i dont think i will post it until i'm close to finishing it" and then... you posted it about a week later.

I enjoyed this chapter as well because of Stan's brain is interestin. yes that sentences sucked but i am so tired I dont care : ) {eace and love man, peace and love.

Yes I am reviewing. At 1:50 am. I have to work tomorrow and can't slep. Okay but I don't exactly remember the exact contents of this chapter, but I read the ending again and I remember thinking... shiat. Cause of Kenny and his M for WEndy. By the way I'm super tired so i'm not using probably english at all and also yes.
I recall this being a coolgood chapter that I enjoyed reading but that isn't news because i always enjoy reading your stof.

Cheers.

Hi,
I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. At first I was confused by how Stan could be so introspective yet so completely dense. But as I kept reading it made sense, he examined things almost too thoroughly and missed the big signs in his closest relationships and in his own behaviors. Can't see the forest through the trees type of situation.
Keep up the amazing work.