I know the feeling.
(Not the suicide, the late nights, silly. XD.)
It's eleven right now and I'm bored. Plus, I want to stay awake.
Not a tearjerker, but- you do feel some sorrow for Naminé. I think. With me so sleepy, it's hard to concentrate/be serious.
Interesting ideas with this, I'd like to see it spun into a longer story. Though I doubt you'll do that. And there's not THAT much to it.

Totally love the word choices and dialogue...Namine was so calm and poised, with an understanding of Nobodies that fit her very well. Marluxia's actions felt they needed to be a bit more defined, as he comes off sounding a bit like an immature, spoiled child, but otherwise, it was great.

I loved how in the end, you wrote how Marluxia watched her with 'the desperate anger still etched on' his face. Most writers often forget to convey that Nobodies are without heart, without feelings, and all emotions they show are fake, drawn from memories. But you remembered this and implemented it into the fanfic well.

The poem at the end was also very lovely, it reminds me of a song, and it matches the theme of the story very well. All in all, great job, I loved it so much that I faved it.

And did I tell you how much I loved the word choices? And no, I'm not sucking up to you just for a cookie. xD *cough* CanIhaveacookieanyway? *cough* lol

wow. who wrote the song. like the band?

Great story...I liked it a lot.
I can feel the hate :D

Very good, and it makes you think about the choices you might have. For instance, would you rather live and be forced to do the thing you know is wrong, or die and be free for eternity? Reviewers, think about that.