It's too fairy tale... no hesitations from yankumi? I thought she is naive & a slow poke who takes pride of her profession. So why did she gave away so easily? Hmm... Maybe her character here is somewhat different. Also the same comment to Shin's character here. He the kind who will struggle to keep his feelings to himself & try to win Yankumi's heart even if he knows Yankumi love Shinohara.. He won't give up so easily, he takes everything as a challenge so I guess here , he is more emotionally weak and low on fighting spirit. But then, if I don't know their characters from the anime & jdrama...maybe I will not comment these. Nonetheless, the story has a good twist, because here Yankumi became a two-timer. It shows how she really is confused with her feelings. It shows a bit the difference between love & infatuation/crush. Thanks for the story & hope you continue to share more!

So cute!
Love the ending!

great story!!

OMG!.. dam! i LOVED THIS FIC!! GOOD JOB!.. i almost cried!..:( lol but yea me wikes it alot ^-^..

sweet.

I hope this is not the end if it is then i'm begging you to write the next chapter please

YAY she chose him my god keep up your good work

OMG when they're together its KAWAII man i love you (figure of speech dun take it personally) for writing chapter this way i'm so touched

man i'm so touched I LOVE YOUR STORY I'm so touched that I'm so speechless this chapter was so sad! I hope they get together

you should make your chapters longer it makes the moment last and by the way I like this story

This is a little fast-paced but getting good I suppose?

Post soon!

YEAH! TOTALLY KAWAI! YAY YSHINKUMI!

continue plz.

what the crosses i mean Kumiko is so uhg!

That was the most beautifulest thing I HAVE EVER READ! :) It is like a scene from the Notebook ya know? Haha.