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Gemini 5/15/04 . chapter 1
GREAT!
The Rose Garden 8/17/03 . chapter 1
You worked in those lines from the show very well. I totally understand how you feel. So well put together.
OtakuInTraining too lazy to sign in 3/21/02 . chapter 1
I've been meaning to review this one for quite a while now...you're so right. Often the piano IS the only one which knows...You've captured her perfectly. I tremble, seeing her caress, pound, then beat the ivories and the blacks, and I smile and nod as Roger enters, knowing all too well htat he will not see. "That touch was not for anyone if not for him." I like that line a lot. It is hands which hold the despair of hands which aren't held, which aren't kissed, which could be dry and calloused yet no one would care to rub balm on. I like this one a lot.
Shadow Ninja 12/2/01 . chapter 1
Two words: amazingly typed!
Silens Unus 11/11/01 . chapter 1
yet another magnificent fanfiction
Lady Razorsharp 10/1/01 . chapter 1
"I wish that it would change, but it won't, if you don't." It sounds like you're a Madonna fan...from "Til Death Do Us Part" from Like a Prayer...and I loved the part where Roger came in "like the end of a day"...you capture his personality and hers so very well...to believe that there could be latent tenderness in those cold hands of hers...and his emotions are so palpable...Excellent!
Kidd 9/30/01 . chapter 1
You and your angst fics...
kitana 9/1/01 . chapter 1
I'm back, who missed me? *crickets begin to chirp* Anyway, I love your stories. They are very descriptive! Keep it up!
AMJ 8/29/01 . chapter 1
wow, favorites it goes.
Evil Spam Mastah1 8/23/01 . chapter 1
Oooh. I really really like this! Written nicely, and smoothly. Flows very well. It's short, but I still enjoyed it, and I don't think the length should be changed or anything like that. It certainly deal with everything that's bottled up inside of her, and I like that. This is just really great!
DottySmithFan 8/23/01 . chapter 1
I think Dorothy would look good in blue too. I like any story that taps in the mind of Dorothy. She's not human yet she is. What does she think about that? You brought her to life and shunk us all to see what it's like. Cool! *_*
Aeri 8/23/01 . chapter 1
:D Great story, that was so good.XD MAKE MOORE! *poke poke* Make more!
End Noesis 8/21/01 . chapter 1
Very Beautiful, it's a good thing you posted it _!
A passer by 8/10/01 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this story, particularilly the ending.
Multi-Facets 8/10/01 . chapter 1
I've felt the same way sometimes, when Blackmoon Night is high in my mind and my blood. It's good to know someone else understands. This is going on my favorites list.
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