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| Pied Flycatcher 2007-09-20 ch 11,  | abuseI enjoyed this very much. Little David is cute and I didn't see the twist coming although it makes so much sense now I've read the whole thing. Thanks for writing this. :) |
| Flaignhan 2007-09-19 ch 11, | abuse*insert massive squee* I loved it. Adored it. You are so good at coming up with PROPER plots that it's just wonderful. I'm incredibly jealous cos I can never do that. I actually got quite worried when mini-Doctor said 'I'm sorry but you can't be here anymore'. I was like omg, rampaging alien who wants the tardis! It all came as a shock but yet the clues were there in it, which is just brilliant. Love love love it. And I love the Martha references as well. The argument with her mug was priceless, hahaha. And now I'm off to read the next one, with a huge smile on my face. |
| Spoofmaster 2007-08-19 ch 11, | abuseAww! I really loved the idea for this, and up through chapter nine it was just a whole lot of fun. Got me pretty down with the big reveal...*sigh.* Is like John Smith all over. Anyway, awesome characterization on both Doctors, and I'm adding this to the Tin Dog. |
| elektralyte 2007-08-18 ch 11, | abuseOh that was great! I'm glad you posted it. |
| Wellthat'slife 2007-08-17 ch 11, | abuseWhat a beautiful story! And the best part I had no idea what was going to happen next. Beautifully written and I have no idea why you were soo worried about putting this up.It made my day so this story has been favourited so thanks Aimee x |
| Persiflage 2007-08-17 ch 11, | abuseWow ! That was quite brilliant... |
| kirby russell 2007-08-17 ch 11, | abusethis story is absolutely brilliant. better than a real episode. i know i'm going to come back to read it over and over again. |
| Syreene 2007-08-17 ch 11, | abuseAww...how sweet! The little moments where he misses Martha...the interaction between him and Helena, and him and his younger self...all with a refreshingly different plot line...excellently done! ^_^ One almost thinks there should be an eventual sequel where he picks up Helena as a companion in the future. ^_~ |