 Roxas's Axel 2009-11-24 . chapter 39-Yes, I’m a complete idiot, but still… obsessed, you know?- Hee hee! This is my favourite line, so far! I love it!
-The refection from my mask! After that, I started to take it off as I entered the building.- Is taking off your mask the smartest thing to do while staking out in the midst of your enemies lair, Robin? I thought you were just joking when you said you were a complete idiot. lol. And here I thought you were the sidekick of the world's greatest detective. You'd think something would rub off. But no...in the end, you're really a glorified acrobat. lol. Don't worry, we still love you. Besides, I'm sure you had other things to worry about. *wiggles eyebrows*
-Realizing that I didn’t want to catch the villain, but instead... you know… be caught by him, wasn’t exactly a welcome discovery, and I spent the next couple of days really locked in my room, brooding.- Oh, pish-posh! I demand that you go jump Slade right now! That will clear everything up! Mua ha ha ha ha.
-It almost brought tears to my own, wondering who had done that to him.- I gues it's sympathise-with-slade-time. Aw! Por Slade! *hides so Slade can't hurt her* I dunno...I don't think I can take this part seriously. I understand Robin obsessing to the point of not calling his friends, and perving on Slade. These are things that do and should happen, but his almost crying isn't really realistic. What? This is a comic book/cartoon, you say? It's not supposed to be realistic? Ok, then, plausible? Yeah. It's not very plausible. I mean, usually they have a relationship of some kind before Robin gets to find out about the eye. And then, maybe, tears are warranted. But I don't think under these circumstances...I dunno.
-holding the bowl of popcorn in my lap all night rather pissed my team off, though…-Hm...hasn't he done that before? *gasps* Are you reusing material on us!? Or is that another fic I read? Anyway, if you are reusing material, for shame! It's time for Robin to find something new to cover up his...er...bodily functions! Or, for a twist, he could just flaunt it!
*envisions scene* Team: *O__O at Robin's crotch area.*
Robin: *shrugs* So, what about it? It's a completely normal male reaction. And pirates are hawt, so it's fine! Get over it!
lawl. It makes me laugh.
-I might have been snoring, who knew?- All's I can imagine is Slade bein, like, WTF! Although, I have a sneaking suspicion that Slade already knows because...he's Slade! Nothing gets by him!
-I moved a bit, but some sort of lagging pride forbade me to hump the beam I was stretched out on.- AW! Darn you, lingering pride! You NEVER let Robin have any fun. Oh well, maybe Robin can have the real thing soon!
-“Aren’t you going to come down tonight, Robin, and say goodbye?”- Ah-hah! I knew it! Pigeon, my butt!
-Gasping like a little girl!- I take offense at that Robin! I'll have you know, I can't recall gasping in my life...screaming and squealing and ewwing, yes...but never gasping. Besides, Slade can make ANYONE gasp. Don't feel bad.
-“I apologize for this, Robin, but I really am moving, and I have a schedule to keep. I’ll deal with you later.” As suddenly as he had lifted me he lets me go, and I fall. I land with a thud in packing straw and see that I’m inside one of the crates, just before it all goes dark. Slade had put the lid on it!- Oh, I squealed at this! Because it reminds me of the ending of the Collector and that is possibly my favouritest ending to a movie ever. And I was just watching it! Of course, the guy sturggled a whole lot more than Robin did, but...Meh! (I also realize favouritest isn't a word. It just sounds better than most favourite to me)
-“I’ll… I’ll call the Titans!” I threaten, not knowing if I really would. Maybe not quite yet.-So if you're not quite ready to call the Titans when you've been nailed into a box, when are you ready to call them? No, Robin would be ready to call them by now. This is now officially way over his head. It's so over his head even Robin would realize it!
-Can’t he just drag his butt in here and get it over with? The door opens. Damn. Couldn’t he have stayed away a bit longer?-Oh, Robin, you're funny. I love you!
-“Relax, my a-“ No. Not a good thing to say. “Go to hell, Slade.” I try instead.- Oh, he'll relax your ass, he'll relax your ass a whole lot! I think this is my new favourite line! Lines...whatever.
-same thing with ‘no’- I'm pretty sure if someone says no, they mean no. Even if they are in the heat of passion or whatever. Or in any case, the other person might want to stop and find out what the no is all about. But yeah, computer's the safety word. Ok.
-“Are you telling me you will keep me here until I agree to sleep with you?”- Oh, Robin, didn't you say you wanted to get get caught? You were so eager before he threw you in the crate! Just pretend like that didn't happen.
-“There might be a blog…”- No, no. THIS is my favourite line! <3
-“Did he touch you? If he did, I’ll kill him!” he snarls.- Oh, I love over-potective Slade. In small quantities, or course.
-HA! Got it! The last button! Take that, shirt!- Robin: 1, Shirt: 0.
-Why didn’t I just rip it?- Robin: 0 Hindsight: 20.
As for your experiement, it wasn't annoying to read. I don't know if I would want to read another first-person lemon. Although, it is very interesting to hear his thoughts during the act. But it also kinda sounds like Slade's doing all those things to me...and that creeps me out. I applaud your efforts, though, because I think writing in the first-person POV is the hardest POV there is. You have to really understand a character and how their brain works to write them that way. It's especially hard if you're writing first-person for a character in somebody else's fandom. Since you only understand what the character allows the audience to see. So I suppose that gives you a little bit of leeway about how his brain works, but you also have to make his thoughts match up with how he acts in the fandom. It's difficult, but you did a fair job. There were some parts I couldn't believe Robin was thinking that way, but the whole entertainment of the fic made up for any errors in his judgement. This fic was just a lot of fun to read! Thanks a lot! Love, love! |
 Roxas's Axel 2009-11-23 . chapter 37Yeah, I was actually surprised you painted the Bat in such a positive light. Do I personally believe the Bat would encourage Robin to join Slade and learn from him? Not really, no. Not unless he was the last man on earth. *shrugs* Maybe he is. But I'm pretty sure Superman or someone like that would be Bat's first choice. But who knows what happened to them? You made it seem like they were all dead...but I kinda find it hard to believe someone killed Superman...unless they made him swallow kryptonite or something and then sliced him up or something. Hmm...What a perfectly villainous plot. Sounds like something Lex would do. Well...hire someone to do. I can't imagine him actually cutting Superman up himself. I must say I like this, though. I don't know why. It has a quality. It's short and to the point. *nods* I like it! |
 Roxas's Axel 2009-11-23 . chapter 55...Wynja...I love you, and your work...and the whole Slade/Robin dynamic you have going. I truly love how their relationship is different in each of your stories, but still retains its believability. But I think this was a little bit too much for me. And I'm not even talking about the whole "Peace Contract" backstory. That I won't get into at the moment. I'm not really into M-preg when it comes to the Teen Titans fandom, but that isn't my issue either. In fact, it's a pretty good twist.
It's how Robin's been turned into a girl! I don't care what you say, Robin can't develop mothering instincts! Giving a guy a womb should not mess with his hormones. Especially since I'm fairly sure our womanly hormones come from our brain, and I'm pretty sure Raven didn't mess with that...this time...
And the fact that he's looking forward/loves nursing? Robin is truly fucked in the head to think like that and I REALLY dun like it. That is not a typical m-preg reaction!
Please don't take this as flame, it's really not. I just felt like unloading my opinion, and all feedback is good feedback, right?
Hee hee. Rose is doomed to be a yaoi fangirl for the rest of her life. Oh, the wonders of having two guys as parents! *wicked smirk*
Oh, and here we go again. *sigh* Poor Robin. He will never be the same again. *cries in a corner* I need some kitty shipping now. *goes to read Titans Tails* Or maybe just your TT based drabbles, I'm not sure yet. Or were the comics based on the drabbles. *shrugs* Either way, love love! |
 Tsuki of the Roselight 2009-11-21 . chapter 63Lovely little twist! I adore this drabble! It was awesome! |
 somekindofsomething 2009-11-20 . chapter 63that was awesome- thank you! little bit of sladin goodness to tie me over until (dare i mention it... the christmas present?!?!) wonderful wonderfulness - liked this plot. love robin bein all conflicted while slade's just like- screw it. ha |
 Sagerune Yagami 2009-11-20 . chapter 63Lovely Sex scence! so i was scrolling through and saw.. OMG you've updated Delightful Drabbles and Just HAD TO Read!
Wynja this is Sagerune by thew way but i've addaded Yagami since i've loved trhat name since i read deathnot and fell in L-O-V-E with Light Yagami! |
 Kawaii-kuro 2009-11-16 . chapter 62Yay Norse mythology! My super geek-glands are swollen now because I (who lives nowhere near Scandinavia) knew who you were talking about. I feel accomplished and nerdy. I see Red as Loki though, he has the personality for it XD! Haha! And then Robin would be Freyja! Slade as Odin is just perfect though. Oh, the mind reels!
I wonder what they will be... It would be funny if Robin had them dress up as superheroes. |
 Lemony Goddess 2009-11-16 . chapter 62I love these drabbles of yours! Red X happens to be my favorite character and Sladin X is now my favorite pairing. The amazing thing is that you have also made me like the Speedy/Red X pairing! I never would have thought of them being together but the "Terms" series cracks me up! You definitely need to continue that storyline some more. The Circus Freak universe is intriguing as well. Can't wait until Neko Robin has babies! :) Continue soon please. |
 Dameon-grey 2009-11-11 . chapter 63I... don't know if a sexy "I need to change my panties" fanfic has ever made me laugh so hard!
Great flippin' job. And I'm sorry I have no criticism for you, I don't think you need it. XD |
 mikinyet 2009-11-10 . chapter 63Happy belated birthday! With RL at the moment I've only just managed to get time to read this the email alert has been taunting me for days lol. Brilliant fic I loved the little twist at the end of it being Robin's birthday. I can see Robin having set it up with RedX helping for a price of course (like the security camera footage *cough, cough*) |
 Soryu 2009-11-08 . chapter 63 Oh, and I forgot to say: HAPPY BIRTHDAY WYNJA! You are the best! :D |
 Soryu 2009-11-08 . chapter 63 Wow, three drabbles in close succession! And all good, too. Wonderful job, Wynja!
Here I really liked the little twist at the end, and the sex was smokin' hot! Y'know, I'm inclined to bet that Robin wasn't in for this surprise, and I'd bet on Red X for thinking about something so naughty, and having the balls to try to set this up too! For drugging Robin, I could see Speedy giving a willing hand if Red X could manage to convince him that Slade wouldn't really hurt Robin... I'm just not sure if either of them are good enough to set everything up without triggering a single alarm... but maybe yes, since Red is a pretty good thief.
I wonder if now that both Robin and Slade had their present, they would want a little funny 'revenge' as a strange sort of 'thank you' scary present to the ones that dared to mess with them... |
 Soryu 2009-11-08 . chapter 62 Since this is unfinished, will you rewrite it after you used the costume idea in real life, or will you add a 'part 2' separate drabble? I have to admit that, as it is, I didn't understand what everyone is wearing... It's really cute though, with both Red X and Slade wrapped around Robin's little finger...
By the way, since this is a police party, will the Teen Titans be invited too? Or maybe not, since their 'complete mission' rate had dropped a lot? Oh, this could be fun... |
 Soryu 2009-11-08 . chapter 61 Aw, this is so cute and sweet! ...and funny, too! I loved the lighter Halloween air of this drabble, and I loved how you portrayed Red X. Considering that I don't even really like Red X/Robin, I'd say you've done a wonderful job! Brava!
Oh, and the snippet about the mini-Slade kicking Robin was (for me) the best image of the whole drabble, I laughed a lot!! Thanks! |
 Nicole 2009-11-07 . chapter 63 lol I like your type of drabble. I knew Robin set it up straight away but I'm sure everyone did. Great chapter and Happy Birthday! |
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