 Ukeia Uchiha 2009-11-06 . chapter 7 what the fuck? come on danm it, keep writing! i think Itachi should live, but i know alot of you peeps like sasuke.
i really do't care please just finnsh the story!>:( |
 sandsibscrazy 2008-11-17 . chapter 7Just ramble on the next chappie! I don't care as long as you update! This cliffie was HELL! |
 account-is-abandoned-4ever 2008-05-23 . chapter 7Nice story so far =]
Don't worry about your writer's block...I've had mine since October of 2006 and i lost my partially written next chapter to one of my fics, and of course I have forgotten all of my plots and story-lines...but as an idiot, that happens a lot for me, maybe you can re-read your current story over a few times and see if you can add on or remember your plot-line and original idea of the direction your story was headed.
Good luck =] |
 Erendhyl 2008-05-01 . chapter 7Don't worry about us getting mad; writer's block happens to all of us. (And I hate it...) I hope you remember soon though, because that was an evil cliffhanger. Sorry to say I don't have any ideas to offer you, mainly because I'm not entirely sure what you planned to do in the story, so I don't know what ideas would fit with that. |
 Erendhyl 2008-04-29 . chapter 6Teru scares me. Itachi is good here, yay! He is not evil, Madara said so! It's nice to read a story where he isn't evil, especially because there are so few of them. Hopefully he didn't just die... then again, you think he's awesome (and I agree ^^) so you probably didn't. Great story! |
 Erendhyl 2008-04-29 . chapter 5Must. See. What. Happened. Great job! This story is really suspenseful, and it has a lot of Uchiha appearances. Go Uchiha! |
 Erendhyl 2008-04-29 . chapter 3Sweet! I wonder how Sasuke's going to take the idea that Itachi has kids... That will be funny. Awesome story, I'm off to read the next chapter! |
 Erendhyl 2008-04-29 . chapter 2Weird, Itachi has kids! I sense trouble coming... Who cares if Karin's left out near Orochimaru's minions... on second thought, I care! That means they'll meet up with her, and then she'll hopefully die! (Sorry, I really hate that *. She needs to stop attempting to seduce Sasuke every few minutes. He belongs to Sakura!) |
 Erendhyl 2008-04-29 . chapter 1Hi! I finally started to read this! (It's about time I did...) Nice beginning, and you were right. You leave off at evil cliffhangers. Evil! (Sorry, I just had cake so I'm a little hyper.) I'm off to read the next chapter now! |
 ArtisticSai 2007-12-04 . chapter 6You used the "big words" gun. sweet! |
 ArtisticSai 2007-12-04 . chapter 5Wow! Action packed! Who won? Who won? |
 ArtisticSai 2007-12-04 . chapter 3I like the different personalities of the kids...good job |
 ArtisticSai 2007-12-04 . chapter 2Corrupting young ones now huh...hehe |
 ArtisticSai 2007-12-04 . chapter 1Ah cliffy |
 Loveless Minji-chan 2007-11-16 . chapter 7Reread it and see if you can remember!!I wanna see what's gonna happen!! |