AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!

WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ

i like it.

TT^TT awh he DIED... well... i guess we can't all win. I like it. You should make a sequel... like of how Jack and his 'heaven' or 'hell' or i don't know 'limbo'. And then you could have Chase die and join him 8D and have hawt smexy sex. It's just a suggestion though.

ME LIKE! ^^

this was a wonderful read, beautifuly done. Brava!

Loser ^.^

that was really good. the way jack dies, is probably the coolest way...i mean TB died of intenal organ damage, but that has nothing to do with anything...well done...

~316521

PS. TB is a dude in my head just in case you were wondering what the crap i was talking about...

AH! No! But so beautiful...I almost cried during this one. I loved the way that you described the death. It was almost poetic. *sigh* Now I am giong to go find a dark corner and be depressed for a little while, but still contemplating the perfectness of Chase and Jack. I send you cookies and a gold star!

...Oh God, that was so... sad and yet... sweet. ;__; And when Jack called Chase 'Ai ren'... I sobbed ;__; Nu!!

A great story. Keep on writing! May the Muses be with you!

Not you that to say... only *snif * bua! T_T

it's sad, beautiful, and heartfelt. I'm ok though... (sniff)

TTATT aw, it's so sad yet, so sweet!