haha, love it!

Lol!

This had me laughing so much :D

I love funny rival moments like this xD gawd it was so funny!

KAWAII!!
*oo*

This is nice!~

oh lol. that was so cute. ^^ Sasuke and Neji are such idiots.

3 Words. I. Love. You.

DO MORE PLZ xD

*laughs loudly and scares the bejeebers out of my parents*

Oh those two crazy-eyed men! XD

Aww this was cute:)

I love the one-shot. At the end it's funny.^^ Good job.

poor neji, poor sasuke xD that was a great story! love it

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH- im getting bored soo_LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL!!

ahahaa...that was pretty funnyy..


i'm glad i found an awesome authoress who wrote a sasuxsakuxneji...i've been trying to find some...


lovely oneshot!!


you're a great writer!


hmm...may i request another sasuxsakuxneji...but with more romance? im a sucker for a jealous sasuke/neji :D

I'm tired so I'll be brief.

On the bright side:
* Funny
* In character
* Good grammar and spelling

On the down side:
* Weak, lazy writing
* Sentences don't flow smoothly
* Repeated words in the same paragraph

Tip: re read your stories carefully before publishing them ;)

to funny

me likes :)