a disturbing and insightful story
thought worthy

AWESOME.

Hey, Eyes of Shinigami!

Wow, very interesting! Very original! I really like the concept of Goku being able to talk to Seiten Taisei and I like how you portrayed the Great Sage. Definitely got a Yin and Yang thing goin' on here. Although, it seems a little odd that Goku would keep this a secret from everyone else. Then again, how exactly would you explain that, especially since no one else can hear or see him? This, of course, could lead to one fateful night when he's been calling for some time and they haven't reached a town yet. Goku can't take the voice inside his head anymore (Sanzo could sympathize) and he asks for a mirror of any sort. Heck, the rear view mirrors on Hakuryuu's jeep form would probably work. But, then again, that's just me. I'm all about sharing secrets that were never meant to be shared. It's a bad habit of mine. I just like exploring everyone's different reactions. Anyway, awesome story, very original and I enjoyed it very much. I would love to see more stories along this line (think of the conversations they could have!) Very nicely done!

-Ms. Zeal

the return of saiten taisai/goku this story sounds intriquing whens the next update is their going to be a continuation to this story or is it a one shot story.

Hm...deep, thought-provoking...I always knew there's something more to Goku than the forever-hungry chibi we have come to love...

Heck, when you have Seiten Taisei for an alter ego, you'll never have a superficial moment.

The mirror truly is a remarkable device. I have always thought it shows the person one would always like to be, but can never be. After reading this, I found out how a mirror can torment one's mind in a different way.

Then again, I have never believed the mirror is used for vanity only, anyway.

Great job on this one!! I really liked the theme.
A+

Not including 'Liturgy' this is really ...um...can I say I have no words to say?

but

this goes in my favourites
this goes to C2 and I will pimp this everywhere!

I think this is one of the most evocative Seiten Saitei pieces I have come across.

That was very freaky. It made me pity Goku so much, to think that he would bare that burden on his own.

It was quiet in-character, to me anyway (we all have our own view on Goku). I liked how you have laid this out and your idea for the story, very original I must say. I like it how you didn't make Goku cower and stand up to his alter-ego, very nice.

It really is a pity that Kazya doesn’t show what goes on in Goku's mind that often in the manga, so we don't really get that much of an insight on him, so I congratulate you on how you've managed with this little piece.

*favours*

~Fall

Now that's awesome...I've been listening to Crawling as a background music when I read this.

Ah, Leslie, do I smell St/9? Or is that just my little deprived fangirl pleading for it? XD

I really enjoyed it, acctually. It was better then if Seiten and Goku were together, in my opinion. I could so see him being possessive and lonely and wanting Goku in his own sort of way, and I could see the hints of that through it. I loved the sort of meloncholy Goku, not full out angsting. It flowed and moved really well.

All in all, I loved it.