 CloudxKadajLover 2009-06-27 . chapter 13OMG. *collaspes* XDD A HAPPY ENDING! :'D Which doesn't really happen often with your stories lol and it's funny because I almost expected a bad ending, so this really took me by surprise and I'm so happy! FINALLY Kei tells him he loves him, homg. DX And at least he won't kill himself, not for awhile. XD Anyway, besides the surprisngly sweet and relieving ending, I will admit I read this ENTIRE story in one night, because, yet again, your story has grabbed me and, if it were in book-form, it was a definite page turner, it was so MARVELOUS and suspenseful and I actually think I would prefer this as the real script for Moon Child compared to what the movie actually was, honest! All of the main themes of the movie were in this, and, like the movie, despite everything that happens everyone turns out okay. :D Except in this case it's a lot better because they aren't all dead lol. But I loved everything about this, your characterization was PERFECT, I love Kei even more and I don't think I'll last without you making more stories, honest. YOU ARE AMAZING. <3 This too definatley goes under best fanfics I've ever read. And thank you for putting in all the random Kei and Luka tidbits, they reminded me of "Through The Ages" and made me smile. And I love the idea of giving Kei a lil box with his memories (He still has the cigarette case! *AW!*) Okay, as it's 3 in the morning, I should be off lol, but again AMAZING SUPERB FABOLOUS JOB with everything and you rock. /end review. XD |