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| Shandrial 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseI know it's just a quick pick, but man, I would love to read more of this. You've got my interest peaked with whats going on. I want more! Heh. Well done. |
| hoellenwauwau 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWah, you can't just stop there?! This is what I meant about your longer story being the better one - it at least goes on for a while ;) Now I too realize this was a one-shot, maybe you'll continue someday? Please? ;) |
| Wildfire's Flame 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. You sure have my interest peaked. I know that this is just part of the Quick pick, but I would love to see this in an expanded story. grins. I'd love to see Murdock's explanation as to why Amy is there when she's not supposed to be. ^_^ |
| trecebo 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseWhilst nice and short, packed with fun details, I really want an ending of some sort, ya know? I did like the point of bright (white) being harder to hide. You were able to really push home some of that inuendo...bwah! |