Beautiful ending, nice work.

I love fics about Ariana, and this is really good. I love the glimpses into her life, and you really got inside her head. Excellent!

Not a big Harry Potter fan, but very nice work. Very moving.

That was just...

Amazing.

This was very moving and very well written, an I liked that it jumped around so much, I thought it made the story better... I have read so many where that takes away from the story but in yours it just adds to the effect.

Good job!