Wow. This is so good.
And sad :(
I love Jacob <3

great job.. so sad .. jacob is amazing. all said XD

I really like this oneshot, a lot. But it cusses once, which kinda ruins it. It doesn't really fit the rest of the fic, you know? It would be much better if you got rid of it. And I'm not just saying that because I don't like cussing (which is a good point though, because many people don't like cussing, and they wouldn't think of the fiction as highly), but because it just doesn't fit the mood of the fiction. :)
Hope that was helpful.

natalie

This is a really cute one-shot :D
I'll enjoy geometry better now xD

wow...
this is amazing. i love it!!

Dear God that was fantastic!

I hate math too lol but this was really good. I like the part about fault lines in his heart. I love Jacob and his angst haha.

aw i love jacob. not everytime i'm doing my geometry homework i'll be thinking of his love for bella...

I LOVED this.

Poor Jake, doomed to love a girl he can never have...

I really enjoyed this - you have a nice writing style.

wow that was amazing! i'm a huge fan of jacob/bella but this was a really great way to stay true to the story. great job!

this is depressing. at least, for me, but i won't go into that. you're a really good writer. :D

Wow, that was really original. :-) I liked the geometry theme - it worked well for this piece.

Great. Really good story, very well written and elaborated. You're moving to my favorite authours list now.