I like your story a lot except i wish you could please write the chapters longer and i want the zfighters to find out about claire and sarah. Hope you update soon and if you have a mailing list please put me on it.

My rating: FIVE STARS! WHOA! Great great great great more greats times infinity! I LOVE THIS FIC! See, I love these fics where people from our world fall into theirs... I seriously cannot live another day if you do not update. Please do, otherwise I shall glomp you until you have oxygen depletion. And then I'll sick Veggiechan on you. ^_^;;
Write/Rock on, girl! ~SnowEyes

Cool, I love the story. Hope you write a chapter soon.
Chaka

I think your story's great, write another chapter soon.

this is the most BORING STUPID story i have ever read!!!!!hahahayhhaha u suck

that was rely rely good great star better than any of mine

ooooo!!Intersting!! must write more!!! I think Claire shud start to know Goten better though since she cud muck up the whole DBZ world!!

I liiiiiiiiiiike Goten lol I doooo..... how can you not thing he's cute??? aaaahh well anyways.....

*raises eyebrow* hopefully this won't be a Mary Sue........... umm... sounds good so far, but who ever said we're the "real world" and they are the made up DBZ world... it can be the other way around..... theirs is the real world and ours in the made up........ heheheh ignore the preview comment ^_^

This is really good!! Keep it up!! And Goten is cute!! I love the idea of the two girls from our world to theirs that would be sooooooo cool!!!! And poooor Pan and Bra!! Well hurry up with the next chapter!!
Tata for now!

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Get off your bum ** and write some more.

How can you only have 4 reveiws to this????? This is a masterpiece!!!!! Completly original, great storyline!!!!! Wow... so jealous of the idea... Are the charactewrs modelled on you or your friends? Yey! Write lots more!!!!!!!!! Feel free to email me sometime, it'd be cool to talk to you!

please write more that is very good!