 Kaynee 2009-09-05 . chapter 244 I love your KH universe!! It fits with the original but better :)
when are you gonna updatie this series of oneshots?! |
 Inuyashagirl2015 2009-08-01 . chapter 20Wow... well you sure do like Cloud/Riku... but thats ok, cause you know what... RHEY'RE ONE OF MY FAVORITE PAIRINGS NOW! THREE YAYZ! FOR CLOUD/RIKU! YAYZ! YAYZ! YAYZ! Thank you very much for introducing me to the pure awsome-ness of Cloud/Riku. You are now on my favorites list. |
 Sudden Change of Heart 2008-11-25 . chapter 293I thought this was great. I love the way you write Reno, and the interaction here between him and Leon is just blissful. The dialogue is believable and funny (believable funny dialogue for Leon is quite a skill!) and the plot holds the attention right the way through (also not easy for a story that's mostly speech).
very much looking forward to more of this |
 Fawn 2008-11-24 . chapter 293 ...I just read all 293 chapters in 2 days. And then felt disappointed when it reached the last chapter. I really liked this... And you've influenced my thoughts in a lot of KH... I'll never be able to think of KH Sephiroth without thinking of Hilargi now, and I'm now looking us Sephiroth/Zexion fics...
Prompts:
Understanding
Flee
Hair Brush |
 ChibiFrubaGirl 2008-11-16 . chapter 293Oh yay! You finally updated. This was super adorable. :3 I can't wait to see how this'll play out.
Continue please~
*bliss* |
 Jediempress 2008-11-15 . chapter 293Well, I'm not too sure if I liked this one overall or not. The main idea is good but something about it just didn't work for me. I do really like the conversation with Reno and Leon once it gets moving. |
 hanakitsunechan7 2008-11-14 . chapter 293Hm,curious. I wonder what those files are... And what the heck do Riku and the others have in store for the town.(explosions?) |
 Nyah-Chan 2008-11-13 . chapter 293The line:
"It’s no wonder everyone swears I carry a torch for him.”"
Confused me. (not in a bad way, just in the 'I don't know what that metaphor means' kind of way) Could you maybe clear it up for me? ^^; I get the gist of it... I think... but...
And Reno was Jesus incarnate once again. I love how you write him!
Typos:
"“Why is ShinRa data o Ansem’s old computer?”"
"data on Ansem's"
"He slipped one hand behind the small of Riku’s back wile he reached out"
"back while he" |
 chibi heishi 2008-11-12 . chapter 293Just awesome, as always. Loved the line: "Great…so a sugar-hyped Turk, the Keyblade’s twilight wielder, a formerly heartless pyrotechnic, a mechina genius, and a normally hyperactive ninja are all plotting something." Also loved the last line about giving others credit. Though I have to say, my favorite part was Reno talking about ShinRa not asking and him not telling. Ever since I read that one-shot about Rude and Reno meeting, the concept of your ShinRa has fascinated me. So I love the little glimpse into their psychology. |
 IluvAUs 2008-10-14 . chapter 292Could you do a story from the prompt "Father"?
I'd really like to see that. |
 Dead To You All -IWasBored- 2008-10-05 . chapter 55I spent the whole story thinking "Oh my god, a Sora/Kairi fic? And then it was Daisy XD
I couldn't stop laughing, nice work! |
 chibi heishi 2008-09-17 . chapter 292Very good, very interesting. I will definitely have to keep up with this collection - each one is impressive, and the story that they're building in snatches is just incredible. |
 chibi heishi 2008-09-17 . chapter 286Oh, nice. And Reno was ten? Ouch. I'll bet that's a pretty interesting story right there - both little Reno's training and Rude and Reno's early partnership. Maybe we'll get to see more of that...? |
 chibi heishi 2008-09-17 . chapter 282Nicely done, Zexion. And yay for the (hopeful) return of semi-sane Sephiroth. |
 chibi heishi 2008-09-17 . chapter 280You seriously expected self-mutilation criticism for this? Seems perfectly logical to me - he needed to find out if his blood pumped or not, and the best way to do that was to see if he bled. If he'd done it again that might deserve criticism, but only once? Not very sensible, but perfectly logical. |