Very well writen. I don't usually write reviews, but I had to in this case since I'm an Ikki Tousen fan and this is one, if not the only, story about it on this website. You kept them in character really well. And I adored the story completely. Good job.

To be truthful, I've never heard of this manga, and I probably will never read it. For the sake of curiousity, I read it, and it was pretty good. Your an awesome writer.

P.S. WO! I'm the first one to review. BOOYAH!