You should try and do chapter 2. I'd have something about domestic abuse programs and bring up Al-anon or some other teen program, or pre-teen program for Charlotte to go to and she hears from other boys and girls about abusive situations and to try and encourage her family to seek help. Gloria and the other angels would help give Charlotte strength, and maybe Tess can be a counselor to talk to her family about what theydo to the poor girl and confront the problem and that they make God sad when they use their anger out on a precious girl. The parents would be very emotional to their problems and want to be better people. Charlotte evenutally is shown in the 2012 olympics and she'll win a medal. It doesnt' matter what medal, but she gets it and is proud and her family is proud too as you can show the dove flying and the story ends.

Nice story, but is there a sequal or another chapter to this? Please answer back soon

Awesome story so far. Poor Charlotte. Thinks that she has to earn everything in life, including her parents love.

Good luck on chapter 2.

Oh wow, can't believe I missed this one. I like Charlotte so far, and it looks like Gloria came into her life not a moment too soon. Great job, and update soon!

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That was so pretty! I really feel for Charlotte!

Wow, I absolutely loved it! I think Charlotte's adorable! Great ending too! Keep it up! Update soon!