Great story!!

Top notch stuff!
The jungle is horrible and really comes alive in your descriptions (even with the word limit)
Thanks

Lovely story even if the ending is abrupt

I cry at word limits. *sobble* A lurvly little H/C fikkie.

'S,okay. I like it. Thanks.

I bet sheppie got hurt to when he went down that hill but hes not gross and barfing like mccay and stuff and i bet he gets reel sick when they get back but doesnt barf like mcckay

Strong characterizations. Loved this: “Rodney!” Sheppard put a snap in his voice. “Either you answer me, or I’ll dump everything in your pack into that mud pile.”

Concerned yet not in a mushy way. You'd done a great job showing us what they say vs what they mean. Love it!

I'd like to jump on the bandwagon here and beg for more of this story! Love it, love it! Words... you want words? Let's see, I have some words I can part with if you'll write some more. LOL

Darn word limits!

But I'll forgive you, because it was a fun story anyhow ;) I feel sorry for poor Rodney, what with ingesting, then projecting all of that mud. Poor wubbie... who am I kidding? I love the whump!

Great description of the environment and all the wildlife in it. Loved the teamly interactions, and Ronon, ah, just great. Thanks for another good one NT!

Nice whumping story... I liked how you went for silent Rodney.
Could there be a sequel? Maybe?

Ya know, Rodney has lots of luck and its all bad. Sheesh. Great start there. Looking forward to more. Laters.

This feels like an ending for chapter 1. Not the whole fic. Don't tell me the queen of SGA angst has run out of words here! ;)

This was excellent! Your description of the jungle is amazing. The Challenge rules aren't going to prevent you from writing a sequel, are they? I mean .. poor Rodney.

Great story! Now we need part two!

Aw, poor Rodney!

I really liked the descriptions in this fic; they were very vivid, and I could clearly see this planet in my mind's eye.

I hope to see more fics coming soon!