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GuesssWho
2008-07-08 . chapter 12
It's enough to make you think Neville's possessed . . . ;)
GuesssWho
2008-07-08 . chapter 11
Yes, he is the sort to die fighting . . .
Fate
2003-07-12 . chapter 12
I absolutely loved this story!
And I know I mentioned this before, but I also love your insane attention to detail!
Keep up the great work!
Olethros
2002-05-27 . chapter 11
I hate/love/loathe/love/despair/love/cry/love this story. *sigh* Okay, I guess you could figure out that I hate the idea of a *certain someone* dying, but the way you did it...wow.

A tour de force, my dear. Never losing sight of the dark side of the GD, making sure to keep that personality intact even as he fought for the good guys. ;) A touching ending, I really like the Socrates parallel as well. I am eagerly looking forward to more from you!
Cor-chan
2002-05-27 . chapter 11
Ooooh! What an excellent chapter! The only thing I would do to it would be to run it through spellcheck one more time; there are a few errors. Other than that, I found Mr. Lecter's final scenes chillingly amusing. Grotesque, but it suits the situation. And how fitting that Hannibal should die as the noble Socrates did! You are the clever one, indeed. Write more!

Ta-ta for now, mon chère! *blows kiss*
Olethros
2002-05-03 . chapter 10
Have to have the tea, don't you? ;) Thank you for the timely update, it was very much enjoyed. The increments of suspense you're doling out are masterful, please continue soon!
Olethros
2002-05-02 . chapter 9
Marvelous work, as usual. I liked the reference to the French Revolution with the name "Robespierre", very nice. I can't believe this story is almost over, but it's been a wildly satisfying ride, thank you. :)
Olethros
2002-04-23 . chapter 8
So glad you treated us to another chapter of this. :) Even knowing where this is going...I still can't wait to see how you get there. Please continue soon!
Olethros
2002-02-18 . chapter 7
YAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!! It's back!!!!! That was my first reaction. ;) And then...You evil, evil, cliffhanger-writing person! I do believe that McGonagall may well have several things to tell...and please update us on the GD's condition too. So glad to see this back. :)
Anubys
2002-02-17 . chapter 7
Thank you for getting another chapter out!! I've been waiting very anxiously for this and am looking forward to seeing more (hopefully soon!)
Anla'shok Ivanova
2002-01-05 . chapter 6
When I first started reading this, I have to admit I was a bit creeped out. Your disclaimer told me right away who "Dr. Reader" was, and I was really worried about poor Harry. But I was also intrigued, so I kept reading, and kept reading... and this story is rather good. You write evil cliffhangers, though, and I really want to know what happens to Hermione's parents, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Something else I was going to mention...oh yeah. I really, really like the way you've written Snape. I wouldn't mind seeing him play a larger role in the story, but I know you can't include everybody's favorites, and the story goes where it goes. I'm slightly annoyed with you for killing off Draco, but I hold firmly to the notion that it wasn't his idea to join the Junior Death Eaters' Club, and that helps.

Did I mention I'm looking forward to the next chapter? :)
Olethros
2001-12-05 . chapter 6
Ooooh, things are really heating up now. This chapter has been well worth the wait. But please, don't make me wait too long for the next one, pleeeaasseee? *makes puppy dog eyes*

I love the way you're playing emotions and tension so well. It makes the story all the more exciting!
Gia
2001-12-02 . chapter 6
that was great! i can't wait to find out what happens next so please get the next chapter out soon! oh and email me when you do! my email address is: ragngdragon00@hotmail.com
Anubys
2001-12-02 . chapter 1
That was awesome! I especially love your method for getting rid of Rita Skeeter!! Bravo. The rest of your story isn't bad either!
Wandering Life
2001-11-01 . chapter 5
All I can pretty much say is: wow.
You have made a great effort to make the story make sense as a crossover and it shows.
Bravo, and I look foward to new chapters soon.
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