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| spencerthekat 2008-03-19 ch 16, | abuseSo this officially ends our voyage of the Paris opera house & the Phantom. :( *STANDING OVATION TO YOU MRS. BOGG!!* :) |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-19 ch 15, | abuseCHRISTINA HIT ERIK WITH THE CANDLESTICK IN THE LAIR...roflol!!(sorry so thinking of the game clue right now..lol). Finally, Jeffy gets some luv - and with Meg - YIPPEAH!! :) I wonder if it had been a different time & place if Phinny & Christina would have worked out...NAH...Mabel was the one for him. :) The combination of mixing the Book, Musical & movie is so perfectly done with this story. I know that I have told you time & time again just how much I LOVED this particular story. Anything to do with Phantom just has a special place in my heart. - and I am proud to add this into my Phantom collection. :) p.s. Now can the boys PLEASE have a vacation - because this Voyage totally did them in!! ROFLOL |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-19 ch 14, | abuseI'm intrigued by the horror that Bogg felt with Christina removing the mask and the relation of Jeff falling out the window in 1982...lol. OMG - they LOST THE OMNI - of all the things!! I really feel like I'm seen the Phantom - great description! I do feel for Erik - spurned by young love! ::sigh:: I am glad that you didn't leave it that he was a "crazed" person that many in the theater thought he was! I am so sad that this story is almost to an end! :( |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-19 ch 13, | abuseJust when I think that I can breathe again - you do it to me AGAIN. Chapter is chock full of angst. My heart in my throat AGAIN. BRAVA :) Now to just let the rest of the story play out...lol The true feeling of the "father/son" relationship that the boys share really shines throughout this story. Loved the water ride references...lol...I bet it was a rush falling into the underground lake. Good thing that Jeff took that Jr. Lifesaving course at the Y, because it sure comes in handy! See all that thrashing about in the water, made them sitting ducks to THE WHIRLPOOL - OH NO!! :O MAGNIFICENT! |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-19 ch 12, | abuseYa know something, at this point, if I was Bogg, I just would have let the Phantom take Christina, grabbed the Kid and got outta DODGE!! ROFLOL! Those catacombs - scary! I don't think that I could bring myself to go down there - RED LIGHT OR NOT!! :O OMG, now you have Phinny in a pickle! How are you going to get him outta this one!?! I guess I have to keep reading :) |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-19 ch 11, | abuseO.M.G. THIS WHOLE CHAPTER - TOTALLY SHOOK ME TO THE CORE!! BRILLIANT - I LOVED IT!! So much raw emotion, I guess that stress will do that to you! BOGG WHAT?! NO SAH!! NO HE DIDN'T ::runs to look again:: OH - HE DID!! OUCH! MY JEFFY (Yes I am STILL tormented by the action in this chapter btw...lol...Jeffy maybe quick to forget - but not me...ROFLMBOPIMP)! :( "All I could think about was you and what would happen to you without me. Who would take care of you? Where would you go? What would you do? All these questions flashed through my mind.” I so need my Hankerchief for this chapter, again, I'm a mess - GREAT JOB!! p.s. No - Bogg is not Mr. Fantastic :( He can not always fix all the problems alone. |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-19 ch 10, | abuseYou know sometimes Bogg is so thick...lol...ya think that something might be up with the chandelier?! ROFLOL Hello - Jeff's the one to told HIM about the chandelier!! I agree with Bogg on this one - Jeffy needs to chill out. The Phantom sure did a number on his composure for the rest of this voyage. I still get shivers from this line: "He closed his eyes, praying that Jeffrey would somehow find safety and comfort and thanking God for their companionship." - very poignant. But it was an excellent decoy to use to lure Phineas away from Christina! Great Chapter G! :) |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-18 ch 9, | abuseHey I want VSR!! Where do I get a receiver for that!! OK - can I just swoon - Sings, plays the piano and speaks Norwegian!! :SWOON: ROFLOL That torture chamber really did a number on the Boys state of mind! WOW! You could really feel the emotions of nervousness that they still had. Only Jeff would apologize for going INSANE :O You would think that Armand & Richard would give in a little to the Phantom's request to keep box 5 open! But they are too dense to realize that the Phantom knows all!! |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-17 ch 8, | abuseWOW - I'm speechless! This was just perfect! Can I just tell you again - how much I'm enjoying this story - it is so suspenseful! I really feel like I am there. My heart is racing! The Hallucinations that Jeff had - heartbreaking - here I go again - I'm a mess...lol :( It's going to take JEff a LONG LONG TIME to get over this one - let me tell you!! Never Mind Jeff - ME it's going to take me a long time to get over this...ROFLMBOPIMP!! LOVE IT - Can't wait to keep going on! YOU MY FRIEND - ROCKSTAR!! EXCELLENT! |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-17 ch 7, | abuseWHERE IS HE?? OMG...what have you done to my Jeffy!! Bogg doesn't have time to make small talk with all these people! Good for Mme. Giry smacking him upside the head! I think that she know so much more that she lets on. The catacombs under the theater are so dark & dank. I can feel the rats at my feet...ew!! I just can't take it - my heart is racing - another super chapter! LOVE IT! |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-17 ch 6, | abuseLOL...hold the phone...lol! Only Bogg's jokes around when he is under stress! Whoa - good thing that he had the confidence in what he was doing or they would have been goners! :O Mme. Giry so mysterious is she! That Armand & Richard only showing up on occasion - I don't like the idea on this party! Sounds like the perfect place for the Phantom to make a showing :O Oh My - Jeff is getting a tad bit testy! Well I suppose that I would be testy too in this voyage. OUCH - throwing Mabel at him...that had to hurt! The Boys are really using some zingers at each other. WHAT - WHERE - WHY - OH NO! I MUST GO ON - WHAT JUST HAPPENED TO MY JEFFY! :O |
| Leanne 2008-03-17 ch 5, anon. | abuseDOH - that stupid sumbit review button - I was like no where near done with this chapter and poof - submit it went!! BOO!! Ok now where was I - oh yeah...My Jeffy Torture! Dreaming about the Chandleiere! I so need my personalized hankies for this story! Why is it that you can make me boo hoo...lol. You just have a certain way of writing that makes the reader really picture the scene & can see it unfolding right in front of ya. Personally love the interactions between Bogg & Jeff under stressful circumstances - you certainly feel the intense friendship that these two have for each other. OMG - OK I'm a total teary eyed mess - WONDERFUL JOB! OK - Bogg wants to keep Jeff all safe and sound - but ya gotta bring him on the BOMB HUNT!! ROFLOL Bogg is really getting grumpy with this Voyage - this one is really taking a toll on him! |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-17 ch 5, | abuseThe mixture of throwing in pieces of the Musical is really getting to me :) LOVE IT!! I can just picture the scenes in my head even more vividly. |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-17 ch 4, | abuseI think that our Young Mr. Jones likes Meg! Nice to see him finally have some coversation with someone his own age. But will he ever learn that when Bogg tells him NOT to do something - NOT TO DO IT!! WHAT ARE THEY THINKING - THOSE KIDS...GR!! THIS WHOLE CHAPTER - I can't breathe - this is just so chock full of excitement! OMG - THE NOOSE...there are just no words - no words - AWESOME JOB! BTW...Dauphin - well that taught him now didn't it! :P |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-17 ch 3, | abuseI enjoyed the background on Erik/Christina that Bogg gave to Jeff. Made the story of the "Phantom" that much more exciting. Now who would put a hallucinogen in her milk?! Especially one that would make her do those things! Can ya break my heart anymore that this: "Phineas was already in the doorway. He looked at her with longing and regret for yet another future he would never have." BOO HOO...break out the hankies! p.s. Can't ya just hear him singing :) I know that I can ::sigh:: p.p.s. now that's better - Spencer is all caught up now...lol |