Geez that was intense for such a short oneshot.

I really liked it. It had hotness and depth. Kyle's feelings really jump out at you, as cheesy as that may sound. I feel just miserable for him.

Good writing. :)

Very hot.

That was sad but so well written! I loved it :D

Yum, it plays out like a bitch slap to the face!

This seems so real. Great writing and vocabulary.

Keep. It. Up.

You certainly know how to make a good first impression. This was very detailed for a one-shot. It really makes you feel for Kyle and I like how realistic it is. Keep up the good work.

I'm glad I clicked on this story, because it was definitely a good read. It's deep, which many stories here are lacking nowadays, and it's good to see a good story here and there.

I hope you write more stuff soon. I'm really diggin' your style.
No pun intended.

-Zak

This was a nice little pick me up! Great job. :)