love it

Haha Artistic smut, indeed! Fabulous job, dear. :D

very nice i read the last line and was like wait a minute that sounds like its meant to be in a different movie... XD

For a second there I got so confused because I remembered Elizabeth saying "come back to me" but then I realized that it wasn't Elizabeth, it was Keira Knightley though, in the Atonement trailer. That was a great book.

Anyhow my heart is heavy now, that was so sad but very beautiful. It reads like a poem, it was so poetic. I love it more than words.

Nice! ^^

I love Vienna Teng music!! & Atonement as well.. [can't wait for the movie]
great written!

Aw... that was just wonderful! Very poetic, angsty and overall very beautifully writter! Artistic SMUT indeed! :)

Rock on, mate!

~Shaliza :)

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"The darkest hour is indeed before the dawn."

Beautiful! I loved the imagery.

Wow, that was really good. =)

willabeth for ever. all the way!

wow it was really good well writen i liked it

That was absolutely beautiful.

And I KNEW I heard that line somewhere!

Atonement, omg...best book ever and I have insanely high hopes for the movie. Keira...man, I trust that girl with Elizabeth Bennett for God's sakes! I trust her with Cecilia!

:D

great oneshot great imagery :)

That was wonderful and very well written! I loved it!

Great little passionate snippet from Elizabeth's POV. Please, dearie, write some more. I know that several people will just love this little one-shot.