 Ryan Brooklyn 2009-03-18 . chapter 1Wow, this was a very well written, very good oneshot. I really liked. I especially liked how you kept Jet alive, although it does not feel very canonical. But then, the writers were never very specific in whether or not Jet actually died (as they made fun of in "The Ember Island Players," lol).
Anyway, you did a great job on this fanfiction. Well done. XD
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