Okay, I seriously wanna get to the next chapter now

Wonderful chapter. Riza doesn't miss a thing, now does she? =P

Oh my God. AMAZING. I keep saying that now, don't I?

Just...wow. This is having more of an impact on me than anything else you've written before. Makes me just want to pummel Hawkeye and cuddle Riza. I don't know why but I really liked this sentence: "After a quick study of the needles, glasses, and silverware, he pulled the chalk from his pocket and drew an array on his desk." Bonus points for use of the word study. :D

Well done, great job!

This chapter made me cry. Really. gah. And made me remind of something that happened in the past..

I really like your take on this one. it really shows Hawkeye-sensei's obsession with alchemy and all. Another version to the story. Thanks for the update!

Erinn~

That was amazing. I really felt for young Riza. knowing what was about to happen, it felt like I was watching/reading about a innocent animal being brought to slaughter, having no idea what it's in for. Pops is a... words can't describe the disgust I feel towards him. Despite the dark tone, good job! :-)

I would be lying if I said this didn't disturb me a bit... but that's a great thing! Loved it as always.

This was really quite amazing. It really made me ache with sympathy for the young Riza. You really capture a number of emotions well in this piece. Beautiful work as always.

Kit~_^

Awe, so sweet. "As she smiled that sad smile at him, he came undone. It was one of two choices, either break down right there, or kiss her so that all he could think about was the here and now." That was my favorite part. :D

Good job, a bit confusing, but it worked itself out. Good luck.

Is this a continuation from the last one? Cuz if it is, I'm an idiot... because I read this about 4 times trying to make sense of it, and then I went back to read the previous one and understood. DUH! Lol! Loved the emotion in this one! Too bad this alternate reality is over.. I was enjoying them. But I love the childhood pieces too, so it's fine!

Poor Roy, and poor Riza for the situation they're in.
Like I said i the last review, I really like the idea for this and from the point of view I fully understood what was happening.
Wonderful and bittersweet. Great work.

Oh gosh, so sad!!

Wow! So emotional and detailed. I feel like totally absorbed into the story.