|Reviews for Awakening|
| Mika the Dark princess 9/18/11 . chapter 3
| ovoriel 7/6/11 . chapter 3
this is a great story! please continue it!
| AnimusPatronus 8/31/08 . chapter 3
Yes it did inspire me! Thanks for mentioning me. Loved the new chapter. Sorry it took so long to review! Update soon please!
| LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore 8/14/08 . chapter 3
BRAVO! I adore it soo much! can't wait for the next chapter!
Luv from a Mutt.
| LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore 8/14/08 . chapter 2
Luv from a Mutt.
| Gabryell-P 8/2/08 . chapter 3
Yeah! I really like your fanfiction. I think Nicholas is really creepy.
I hope you didn't stop write it.
Can't wait for the next chapter (if there is a next chapter)
| simmie 8/1/08 . chapter 3
I loved this chapter, it was amazing. Plesae update soon
| sayaka nakamura 6/20/08 . chapter 3
of course i like it! it makes a lot of sense too. i mean, its not like saya and diva just appeared, right? patiently waiting for the naxt update! :P
| ThunderRiver411 6/19/08 . chapter 1
This is a good story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you have time.
| Ides of December 6/13/08 . chapter 3
Keep writing, please.
"A bite of the grilled eel nearly gave her an orgasm"
OH MAH GAWD I DIED HERE. I HOPE YOU LIKED SPLITTING MY LUNGS. XD
I'm interested in this plot, but then, I have a little bit of criticism. Some dialogue lacks commas, and commas can help liven up the speech by adding a pause for dramatic effect.
Just a friendly thought.
| Ides of December 6/13/08 . chapter 2
I'm liking more and more.
The way you write this is strikingly alike the series itself, and Saya's reasonings are very well-played.
I'm loving the romance
Hibiki and Kanade sound really, really cute. I'm just hoping nothing happens to them, now. And ZOMG I love Kai's actions.
On to the next chapter.
| Ides of December 6/13/08 . chapter 1
I like how it's written, but somehow, I think it's a little rushed when Saya calls for Haji.
Other than that, on to the next chapter!
| Kusama Saya 6/11/08 . chapter 3
I waited so long! I think...I can't tell...But update update! XD Haji getting a pillow thrown at.
| D-chi 6/10/08 . chapter 3
but I am so confused. _
I thought Saya could only kill Diva and her Chevalier with her blood, and that she can only have children with Diva's Chevalier.
oh well. .;
| SingsWithWords 6/10/08 . chapter 3
I like! Nice job.