Lov it

this is a great story! please continue it!

Yes it did inspire me! Thanks for mentioning me. Loved the new chapter. Sorry it took so long to review! Update soon please!

BRAVO! I adore it soo much! can't wait for the next chapter!

Luv from a Mutt.

nicely done!

Luv from a Mutt.

Yeah! I really like your fanfiction. I think Nicholas is really creepy.

I hope you didn't stop write it.

Can't wait for the next chapter (if there is a next chapter)

Bye

I loved this chapter, it was amazing. Plesae update soon

of course i like it! it makes a lot of sense too. i mean, its not like saya and diva just appeared, right? patiently waiting for the naxt update! :P

This is a good story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you have time.

Keep writing, please.

"A bite of the grilled eel nearly gave her an orgasm"

OH MAH GAWD I DIED HERE. I HOPE YOU LIKED SPLITTING MY LUNGS. XD

I'm interested in this plot, but then, I have a little bit of criticism. Some dialogue lacks commas, and commas can help liven up the speech by adding a pause for dramatic effect.

Just a friendly thought.

Keep writing!

I'm liking more and more.

The way you write this is strikingly alike the series itself, and Saya's reasonings are very well-played.

I'm loving the romance

Hibiki and Kanade sound really, really cute. I'm just hoping nothing happens to them, now. And ZOMG I love Kai's actions.

On to the next chapter.

I like.

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I like how it's written, but somehow, I think it's a little rushed when Saya calls for Haji.

Other than that, on to the next chapter!

I waited so long! I think...I can't tell...But update update! XD Haji getting a pillow thrown at.

Good chapter!

but I am so confused. _

I thought Saya could only kill Diva and her Chevalier with her blood, and that she can only have children with Diva's Chevalier.

oh well. .;

I like! Nice job.