I hope u write more of this! very much enjoyed reading it :)

Ohhhh lovely, looking forward to more of your fics.

Sexy and romantic, with no need for the grand finale. After all, every episode of 'Firefly' is an unfinished story, isn't it?

This was a beautifully written story. You so captured River, and Mal, with great imagery and word choice. Amazing!

omg, hot.

That was absolutely wonderful. It gives you a little bit of passion without, well, without giving all the goods away at one time. It's always nice to leave a reader wanting more or to allow them to imagine what might happen themselves. Your story read well and left a warm fuzzy feeling in me once I read it. Good job and keep up the good work!

this was great. i loved the bit about Mal thinking how Jayne would treat her, i thought that was very well put, as was the rest of it. is there the possibility of a follow up, another chapter, or another story? cos i'd look forward to reading it :)

I really liked this, it sounded just like River and Mal.

I haven't got much else to say, so... good work!

This does my little Mal/River sould all kinds of good! Thanks!

heh, this is great. You have an increadable grasp on River...and on the way a River/Mal pairing would play out. Off to go read more.