 One-Winged-Chaos 2009-12-04 . chapter 36:O HE CAN'T BE DEAD!
Ah...poor Dei! =[ |
 jadedfox2 2009-12-01 . chapter 36what. did sasori really die? no no no no no. bring him back! loved the emotion in this chapter. hurry and write! |
 jadedfox2 2009-12-01 . chapter 35sasodei lemon, YES!11 X3
great chapter, update again son! |
 Marjolein222 2009-12-01 . chapter 36First reaction when Sasori died: NO SASORI HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!
When I had calmed down, I realized there must be something more. There MUST be! *is in denial*. But anyway.
Nice to see you're writing again :) Seriously, you deserved the break! It was a nice plot twist, the HiroHito collaborating with Iwa, but it worked out and it was totally believable :)
I really wish I knew something useful to say, but I don't except that I can't wait until the next chapter :D
~Marjolein |
 FaintReality 2009-12-01 . chapter 36wait
there are 2 ways to solve this
1. you killed sasori to end the story?! HOW... DO YOU DAREE
but i know you're more intelligent than that
so 2. sasori will fly with his thingies in the back ad kill Hirohito amd ANBU fuckers, then take Deidara to Itachi and Kisame, then the 4 of them will head to home, tell Pain how bastard the Hirohito are, and Pain will plan revenge :D
but its really your choice... i don't mind what you do, the story had been so far so good, and you wont ruin it just for fun... i know you have something planned <3 |
 Ben Tramsami 2009-12-01 . chapter 36Oh my... Sasori just... and Deidara is... just... Wow...
This is intense...
I LOVE IT!
Keep the chapters coming!! I'm ready and eager for more!!
Although, I'm a little sad that this story is ending soon... I hope you know that I've enjoyed it every step of the way! |
 XFamousXLastXWordsX 2009-12-01 . chapter 36the hell?! that was a crappy ending! ah well. i should have seen it coming. *tear* man, dei's going to be miserable. update soon?
xero |
 Anbix 2009-11-25 . chapter 35Yes please. I would love to have some lemon. And at least you're finishing your story. I haven't finished anything. |
 TenKen 2009-11-25 . chapter 35 Gwah, I loved this chapter.
In fact, I love this whole story in general. I've been reading it for quite a while, and you're an excellent writer. <3
As for the lemon, I'd love for you to include one. It would really round off the story well - it'd have everything. But in the end, I suppose it's up to you. ^^
I understand you have a life too, but I'm sure all the readers would love for you to update a little faster!
~ Tenny |
 FaintReality 2009-11-23 . chapter 35God.
I loved this chapter D
can't wait for next chapter! I hope it wont take as long as this one did D;~
have i told you i love this fic? |
 One-Winged-Chaos 2009-11-23 . chapter 35OF COURSE WE WANTS A LEMON!
Ahh, please don't wait so long to update next time! I've been waiting for this for ages! But sill, i had two exams today, and this cheered me up considerably :D |
 Noerani Sato 2009-11-22 . chapter 35I'm not going to lie, but I'd almost forgotten about this story and was pleasantly surprised to see that is was still alive. I'm really looking forward to the outcome of the battle, so I hope it isn't too long of a wait. XD |
 Cherri.Bell.Weasel 2009-11-22 . chapter 35Lemon? we'll maybe not sasori and deidara first time - but maybe a lime with older couples..idk |
 syrini 2009-11-22 . chapter 35OMG YAY NEW CHAPPIE!! this was a pretty good one^^ well there all good but anyway YAY!! |
 RolfeDOL 2009-11-22 . chapter 35You have so many reviews that this one's propably pretty useless, but I LOVE this story _so_ much. Thank you, please keep updating and have a nice... life? 8D |