OMG!!

i love this story, you are absolutely brilliant

i canot wait till the next chapter

XD

I just stumbled across this fanfic, having recently gotten into the Naruto fanfiction genre and I find this to be very well written and quirky. I can understand how university eats up all of your spare time, but please update soon because I sincerely wish to see this fic continued!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE! If you don't post chapter 35 in three months then I will take the time to review on all your other chapters! PLEASE UPDATE AND SPARE ME THE NEEDED TIME!


~Anialis

Hey!

I'm sorry, but I really.. can't find the courage to review all chapters spearately :( Please forgive me.

I just wanted to tell you that I really did enjoy rereading this story, and the last chapter was hilarious. I still can't imagine what Kisame would look like in a dress.

What cracked me up the most though, was the scene of seven missing ninja's debating over how to prepare a can of soup XD It's too funny.

There's still some minor spelling mistakes here and there, 'you're' instead of 'your' for example. If you want me to, I'll beta the already chapters.

On a last note, I hope you haven't lost hope or something. I have to admit I was kind of surprised your last chapter didn't get more reviews, but I really hope you won't leave us hanging here. You have developed amazing characters for every Akatsuki member, and such a nice pace (no making out in the second chapter... it really frustrates me when authors do that). You use wonderful description.. and I love the plot with the Hirohito and stuff.

So yeah. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :) And I hope you're alright.

~Marjolein

hey this is my first time reviewing for this story. i gotta say w/in these past few chs i couldnt stop laughing. who new deidara was so good at seducing sasori or just plain old being a geisha? that scene in the last ch where deidara woke up in sasoris bed was the best. i was kinda expecting the other akatsuki to tease deidara & sasori about that really hot, lol, scene in the bar after they woke up but that ch was still good. besides wouldnt it be pretty boring if it was to predictable? thats 1 of the reasons why its such a good story cuz it keeps the readers going. and when tobi was dancing i wasnt expecting that but its not all that surprising since tobi had worn a dress before lol that was awesome & hilarious. the part in the tree after deidara trained w/ furugane (sry if i spelled that wrong) & sasori was basically confessing that he cant live w/o him, so romantic & then zetsu had to interupt -_-. but thats ok i still like zetsu, like how he threatens to eat people. that dude who sasori thought was familiar during the negotiations, i kinda thought he was that akatsuki spy they had talked to, before the spy tattled on them, looking for revenge for not getting his money but im prbly the only one. now im thinking hes a hirohito spy which btw i was sorta surprised to learn that they were there. also when sasori found out that it was deidara who was the geisha, well loved it but i was a little disapointed that there was no actual yaoi. i was thinking 'oh so saso's finally realised he wants to take dei's clothes off' though, lol. perhaps there'll be some yaoi in the next ch, eh? (brittany begs w/ puppy dog eyes, lol). all in all your story is beyond awesome & that doesn't even begin to describe it. so plz n thankyou 4 posting n writing! oh n ill try 2 review more even tho i know this prbly wasnt a very good review.

OMG! Suspence!! Update soon, your stories are so obsessive!

Aw!! Dei-kun's so cute! I just want to hug him to death right now!

btw, what's Furugane?

I thought Gurosu where killed? Didn't Sasori kill him? Or am I just really bad at remembering such stuff?
Kisame in a dress! xD *mental image* >.<
I bet Deidei was cute in his kimono! and Sasori just had to stare at him!^^
You must go on with the story! You can't stop it now! as you said, there is only about 10 chapters left!
personally I'm dying to get to know what's going to happen now!
Please get another chapter up ASAP^^
PS: Just have to say I loved the scene with Pein in the forest^^ Really epic =D and Dei had no clue at all xD
~Tainy^^

I LUV THIS STORY, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Luv how you made SasoDei happen over time, and not all at once!
U LEFT ME WITH A CLIFFHANGER, I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

~Anialis

Ugh so sorry it took me so long to review! I've been lazy D:

I found these last two chapters amazing though! Great job, i can't wait until your next update!

*squee* Deidara...Geisha... XD Legendary!

Hope this gets updated soon, i'm officially addicted! :D

Update, yeah! I´m so glad to see this story is still going ^_^ Now I can't wait for the next chapter... Many thanks for writing this.

I love it!!
This story is amazing but I speak spanish and is dificult to read -.-''
Wow 900 reviews congratulations Emerald ^^ you are an excelent writer :D

YAY

Woops, I favourited this and forgot to review.
Okay so, Deidara is characterized innocently and more humble to what I'm accustomed to seeing him, but I enjoy it all the same.
It is a different take from the manga on him joining, yet still very canon at the same time with his followings through Akatsuki.
I simply adore this pairing, and I look forward to reading more.
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