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Reviews For: A Little Fall of Rain

Danny
2007-09-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow!
I never read the book and I've only seen the play once, so I liked it. lots.

Danica
Cede
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseThat is so sad!
M Leblanc
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseWell. For writing in musical-verse, this isn't too bad, although it is rather cliché. The dialogue is also a bit unoriginal; it's basically lines from the musical. I must warn you, though, that this scenario is not at all relative to novel events, i.e. Marius is somewhat frightened by Eponine, rather than considering her a great friend. In any case, this definitely isn't horrible for your first Les Mis fic, and I encourage you to write more.
Jehannish
2007-08-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell, it's been done before. But I really liked the way you showed Eponine's love for Marius. I think you got that part down perfectly. It'll be cool to see what you write in the future!

Jehannish's Rating: 7 out of 10
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