That's a really nice story. ^^ It has a nice plot and it's well written. I hope that it'll be continued someday ^^;

...pretty good so far ^_^

oh! XDD I like this story! please update more!! XDD I'll be looking forward toward the next chapter!! XD

I really love this story! It's so well written, and it has my top two favorite pairings! YamaGoku and Yamahiba! WHOO! And to top it all off, Yama angst! I think I love you. X3 Update soon, yes!

this story is very well written ^^ thanks alot

* AMAZING i love it.

ahh~ nice~
wanna know how it will go~
update soon!!

this is really good O_O;; but i see you havnt updated this story for like a year XDD PLEASE WRITE MORE. i love the idea you put in of worried hibari and angsty yamamoto. great job~~

What a good chapter to follow up with! I like who you made the connection of lonliness between the two of them, and I can't wait to see what happens next!!

I like this. There's one thing that bothers me a bit - it seems odd to use all given names for the characters, since mostly they get referred to by family names. Other than that, I like the way your characterisation. It fits Hibari well to realise why Dino needs to leave, and it seems very like Yamamoto to take a hit when he feels down because he's such a physical person. I'm really glad he still thinks of Tsuna as a friend even though he's jealous - there are way too many fics where the characters abandon everyone they ever liked because of one person. Score one for the goodfic side.

"It had been a week since Tsuna finally gave up and let Hayato to be his right hand man." - I find this line hilarious. I imagine Tsuna throwing his hands into the air in despair and going "Fine! WHATEVER." And then Gokudera faints in joy, completely missing Tsuna's annoyance.

Really god fic, it's nice to see some 8018 on here!!