Oh this is so sad snape couldn't get Ba k into normal society
and the world never found out the truth about Harry being a snape
maybe you could do a oneshot of that
thanks so much
keep going
thanks
again

that was a great story. I have red it three times. Hope to read more of your storys

Wow... that was unbelieveable. Very well written, and so depressing... a nice happy ending though, yay! I enjoyed this type of Severitus with not complete acceptance right away and the explanation of both Harry and Severus' feelings towards the situation. Amazing job. I look forward to reading more of your work!

Sad that they didn't grow close when it would do Harry's development good. I understand why you ended the last chapters as you did but for one thing...
When they tore down Harry's natural walls and built up new ones Snape said that not even Voldemort would be able to get thru.
So how did he manage to plant that vision? The only reason he supposedly knew about Harry intruding in his mind in the first place was the Weasley vision when Harry was so affected by it.
Neither of those should have taken place so Mr. Weasley should have died and Sirius lived. At least not died from DOM...

Ek! I love it! Although I wish that Albus would know that it's his grandpa!

...That sounds weird...lol.

Anyway, this was a very well written story! I loved it so much!

all in all, this was a pretty good severitus- but i feel like you really rushed the ending.

the plot had a lot of potential, but the way you just gloss over a few years, with out examining the feelings, etc. of the characters seemed like you couldn't quite figure out how to end the fic, but didn't want to spend much more time on it.

the last chapter was ok, and it almost was a great ending, but it didn't quite click with the rest of the story.

sorry for all the criticism, this is definitely not a flame, as i quite enjoyed most of the story, but i think that, as you are quite a good writer, you could have done a better job with the ending.

thanks!

over water

Thank you for having given Snape the sense to be true to form and have an antidote on hand for the bite of Nagini. That is one of many things that bugged me about the 7th book. You wrote very well and also handled the characters beautifully!

I feel so sorry for Severus. He didn't get much of a happy ending since he has to glamor himself and live in America. I love happy endings too. They may not be as realistic, but I generally get enough of reality every day.
It was a great, very well written story though. I especially liked the fact that Severus survived Nagini. It really bothered me that JKR killed him. There should have been a back-up plan just like yours.
Keep writing!

I will be the first to admit I was slightly dissappointed, I'm a sucker for the typical happily ever after ending, with Snape and Harry having a love-dovey father/son relationship, so in Chapter 15/16 is was not a happy camper, it was a good story and realistic, but i was still slightly sad. That is until I got to the epilogue; it is a testament to your ability that you completed changed my opinion of the story in just a few short paragraphs. Fantastic job! I can't wait to read some of your other stories, so keep writing!

This is nice. It's definitely a twist to other stories. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

i really do dislike Ron with a passion, he gets on my damn nerves!

great story!

this is a weird story and i didnt like it much however it was fairly well written

Yay! Although Harry sort of wussed out in the Epilogue, when he told Albus Severus how to avoid being sorted Slytherin, and Ron clearly still had a jones against anyone from that house (it'd serve him right if Rose sorted there and married Scorpius, is all I can say...).

Well, this was a fast summary...I'm glad you have Snape surviving--after all, he had lots of access to Nagini, he is a Potions Master, and maybe, just maybe, Fawkes remembered his loyalty to Dumbledore.

This is the best solution, really; the Wizarding World is small and parochial, and does its best to devour itself, and that's just during peacetime. Unless the Ministry changes, and Shacklebolt will find that harder than he thinks, there will be a new Dark Lord for a new generation, especially if all Slytherins are automatically considered Evil the way they were when Dumbledore was around.

Good luck to both Snape and Harry!