great, mafinificent, super!

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I really liked it! You wrote them so good!

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aw. thats adoriable! and really well writen!

Aw! I wonder if SM will go over this part in Breaking Dawn. I'd love her to!

Aw, so heartwarming! This has to be my favorite so far of the fanfics that include telling Charlie the news of their engagment. I thought it was funny how Edward called Charlie "Dad" for some reason.

Aww!

That was really good. I like how you incorporated what Stephenie Meyer uses and DIDN'T make it sound cheesy or stupid by saying the exact same thing! Very in character. Great job.

Yeah I really wish that, that part of the story was in the book.

I really liked your fic It was great.

OMG! That was so CUTE!POOCR CHARLIE!LOVE IT!

It's really good so far! It really sounds like a conversation Bella, Charlie, and Edward would have. Please keep writing! UPDATE!