 Dismal Heartache 2007-10-28 . chapter 1Beautiful. Simply beautiful. The way it ends is amazing. Throughout the whole thing, you keep a slight hope that in the end, Ginny will win and fix Draco, but it doesn't happen. And the ending line, God, I love it when people finish a story in a way that, well, the characters are finished. Like, how Draco closed his eyes. Another example, my friend wrote a story that ended in, "Tick tock, tick tock. Quiet." Just how that brings finality to the story. There's still more to it, but you don't need it. You have what you need and what you want. I LOVE it.
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