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Rustinmybones
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseWow! Excellent yet AGAIN!
I'm admitting it right here and now, I'm a BIG Nathan fan. I am - completely. He facinates me, his inner conflict, his outter conflicts, his "gruff exterior", his inner "big softie". The whole shabang that is Nathan - so for me this story has been a double treat!
Why double? You may wonder. The first delicious bite is that this is largely about Nathan, the other savory point is the focus on Nathan and Peter. I adore them as brothers. Having a had a similar relationship with my own brother, my version of Peter... anyway, you did a great job of canvasing their world of eachother.

This piece touched me. Thanks.

Cannon
geniusartist
2007-08-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseAbsolutely gorgeous. What a fantastic character piece and such an accurate portrayal of Nathan; this felt "thick," as though, if I wanted, I could sink my hands into it and take physical hold of the intense emotions. Really well-written. Thank you for sharing and the effort you put into this story.
GreenLeoFiend
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseThis was an interesting read. Good job. "I never kid about Family Brunch."
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