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| Rustinmybones 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! Excellent yet AGAIN! I'm admitting it right here and now, I'm a BIG Nathan fan. I am - completely. He facinates me, his inner conflict, his outter conflicts, his "gruff exterior", his inner "big softie". The whole shabang that is Nathan - so for me this story has been a double treat! Why double? You may wonder. The first delicious bite is that this is largely about Nathan, the other savory point is the focus on Nathan and Peter. I adore them as brothers. Having a had a similar relationship with my own brother, my version of Peter... anyway, you did a great job of canvasing their world of eachother. This piece touched me. Thanks. Cannon |
| geniusartist 2007-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbsolutely gorgeous. What a fantastic character piece and such an accurate portrayal of Nathan; this felt "thick," as though, if I wanted, I could sink my hands into it and take physical hold of the intense emotions. Really well-written. Thank you for sharing and the effort you put into this story. |
| GreenLeoFiend 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was an interesting read. Good job. "I never kid about Family Brunch." |